The boy and girl rode westward from the stables that fine day T'was the end of the summer and first date since they had met The girl seated on the Chestnut and boy on a dark bay They'd talked all summer without being alone as yet
Soon they would both leave for different colleges and careers Their passion for riding would become a distance memory The simple life would soon become a thing of passing years Their equestrian accomplishments probably past glory
Hours later they came to a clearing overlooking a stream A tall silver maple marked the unique dining spot An equisite place for picnic lunches and a summer dream The warm summer breeze making the shade so very quickly sought
They tethered horses to a poplar near the clearing They had brought sanwiches, fruit, pie and wine with plastic glass The boy with arms ladden and the girl with golden earring They sat on red and white linen nostalgic of the past
Chatting of the hot summer gone they smiled and laughed Talked of hopes and dreams and futures that would come to pass They quickly spoke of things to be as white wine they quaffed Conversing the honey bees buzzed just above the lass
A hive in branches high above were home to queen and drones The hansome boy and fair haired girl enjoying chatter Then came a time when girl and boy spoke in more muted tones Perhaps Sensing smell of wildflowers abundant scatter
They both fought for single fork that was meant for the apple pie As if on queue the breeze ceased as if halted in time As wrestling ceased each caught the other's inquiring eye Each gentle leaf bent closer as if intent to see a crime
Hand caressed her chin gently to see what was amiss The meeting of eyes closed out the sense of earthly world He bent down and while caressing her cheek did steal a kiss A hummingbird hovered as the girl's hair unfurled
Secure under the maple's canopy of silver green light Tenderley embraced in passion they whiled away hours Amongst the satin patina of the hummingbird's flight, buzz of the honey bee, and fragrant hint of wildflowers
The sun drifted west unveiling the couple to sun's ray They were no longer under the great maple's safe mantle They packed not envying the promise of end of day They road double with girl behind the boys saddle cantle
As they sadly parted and went their own seperate ways With Visions of ride to the stream and silver maple trees They knew that they would often remember bright summer days Luscious beauty of nature and the warm summer breeze
Secure under the maple's canopy of silver green light Tenderley embraced in passion they whiled away hours Amongst the satin patina of the hummingbird's flight, buzz of the honey bee, and fragrant hint of wildflowers
Wow! I am really impressed.. I am sure most of us have similar first love/summer love stories that they can recall to this day, but wow.. no way could I have spun the tale as beautifully as you have here.. Almost like I was there... lol Good Stuff Larry ! :
wow. I love the reprise. should that rare occurence occur currently, my heart would surely pound. huh, at least I'd be living, albeit, perhaps briefly, but alive.
BeneathePinesnorthern Catskills, New York USAApr 2, 2010
along last comes I.. Indeed a throwback for anyone listening, breathing, reminiscing, or, anxious for such a tree or trees of their own ! Good writing my friend
tomboygirllarnaca, Larnaca CyprusApr 3, 2010
i really enjoyed this-very romantic and you painted it so clearly,very real.
Comments (21)
rob
I simply love the line Each gentle leaf bent closer as if intent to see a crime. What poetry!
experience or express this kind of majic.
Thanks.
Put em up Rob we'll dual
with canes...lol.
Gnj4u. Appreciate it.
If only life could be as calm, simple
and beautiful. To
a simpler time
Twas a lovely summer.
liked it.
Tomboygirl...lol