Forgotten Love

How I would sacrifice all to see you once more
But it seems to me you have found my flaw
For I am a man that fell on he’s own sword
It was no request; it came to me untoward

It was no self-sacrifice, no dismal pathetic plea
But once again it brought me down too one knee
Could I deem to contemplate the searing pain?
Of a heart that bled pure sadness once more again

I would hone my blade to keep it thus keen
If perchance with my eye you might be seen
Why not linger? Why do you require your flight?
Would my swords sharpness quell you of this right?

For you it would therefore rust in its sheath
For an aging Lion has no need of angers teeth
Even he would swallow he’s pride and deign
For an empty throne is nowhere proud to reign

I continue to seek what cannot, by me, be found
My heart will not let my mind thus confound
Time to me can seem so blindingly cruel
If it will not see that I have played the fool

The passing of moments are just an empty space
Where amour has left leaving nought of a trace
Then I would plead for passion to change my lot
But I dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Ahh well, life goes on!!

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Comments (34)

madtat29
The aged lion has no need of angers teeth...Very clean Rob...drinking
Pinkpoetress
Rob,
Wonderful write. A little sad. But great work as usual. I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.
optimisticme
good write rob, feelings came through.
Swan87
Im such a fan of you & your heart melting poems ..
and yeah .. life goes on :)

many thanks rob

Swan
tomboygirl
truro,this is lovely,really very good!
agoodguy2have
an excellent effort rob stanzas 4 & 5 are particularly good i think! 1 question...is there hope for us to still seek?
lavina
Well there is always a hope and yeah life will go on .....

bouquet
hedistuff
ah..nice poem...
paloma66
Rob,Rob why do you stir the Soul.Just wonderful Rob.I love this,sad,beautifully written poem.thumbs up
jazzy75
Rob...excellent write! I can really feel the undercurrents of this one!thumbs up thumbs up
caroljoyce
I like the image of a heart 'bleeding sadness' and the old fashioned wording, as though from the Romantic Era.
Pabalelo
A heavy poem Trurorob with lots of emotion. A great poem.
Earlgreytea
"The passing of moments are just an empty space
Where amour has left leaving nought of a trace
Then I would plead for passion to change my lot
But I dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot"

Great write Rob, thanks for sharing, the above phrase hit a chord with me...
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
So many poignant lines. Though, I am still hunting for the narrator's flaw. Clearly this love is not forgotten. Thank you for sharing.
trurorob
Thanks Madtat!!
rob
Happygolucky4u
Lovely write. But so sad. To dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot, what a dark and dismal thought. But I may be there myself bouquet
purpledragonfly
As always Rob.... another good write.. Quite a strong poem!!!
trurorob
Thanks Pink!, enjoy your rest!
rob
trurorob
Thanks Opti, where you gone??
rob
trurorob
Thank you Swan my friend!
rob
trurorob
Thanks TBG, hope you are well!
rob
Redex
What a sad lovely poem Rob, Ah last line strikes a cord. Hope you are wellteddybear
Ladybee42
it is a sad poem and very well written,
sometimes we just need to be sad and
work our way back to the good moments
again..thumbs up thumbs up wine bouquet
Christmas1
Robbie...I cry for you. Do not relinquish your love..it still can be...have you not said so to me? baby..let me hold your hand.
trurorob
Thanks Dave
rob
trurorob
Thanks Lavina
rob
niah9
Once you transfer to the written word from emotions Rob, I like to believe the healing begins...I hope this was so.....
comfort hug Niah.teddybear
iamwhoiamyousee
would say we can all relate to this one way or another..very nice write..could feel the stab..wine
trurorob
Thanks Hedistuff
rob
trurorob
Thanks Paloma
rob
trurorob
Thank you Jazzy my friend
rob
trurorob
Thank you CJ!
rob
BlueOcean2011
This is Poetry for the study of English Literature in Oxford University.Very Intellictual.Masculine Poem.handshake
Loved it.
trurorob
Thank you Blueocean, kind words
rob
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