How I would sacrifice all to see you once more But it seems to me you have found my flaw For I am a man that fell on he’s own sword It was no request; it came to me untoward
It was no self-sacrifice, no dismal pathetic plea But once again it brought me down too one knee Could I deem to contemplate the searing pain? Of a heart that bled pure sadness once more again
I would hone my blade to keep it thus keen If perchance with my eye you might be seen Why not linger? Why do you require your flight? Would my swords sharpness quell you of this right?
For you it would therefore rust in its sheath For an aging Lion has no need of angers teeth Even he would swallow he’s pride and deign For an empty throne is nowhere proud to reign
I continue to seek what cannot, by me, be found My heart will not let my mind thus confound Time to me can seem so blindingly cruel If it will not see that I have played the fool
The passing of moments are just an empty space Where amour has left leaving nought of a trace Then I would plead for passion to change my lot But I dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot
Rob...excellent write! I can really feel the undercurrents of this one!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 30, 2010
I like the image of a heart 'bleeding sadness' and the old fashioned wording, as though from the Romantic Era.
PabaleloWorcester, Western Cape South AfricaApr 30, 2010
A heavy poem Trurorob with lots of emotion. A great poem.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 1, 2010
"The passing of moments are just an empty space Where amour has left leaving nought of a trace Then I would plead for passion to change my lot But I dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot"
Great write Rob, thanks for sharing, the above phrase hit a chord with me...
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Wonderful write. A little sad. But great work as usual. I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.
and yeah .. life goes on :)
many thanks rob
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Where amour has left leaving nought of a trace
Then I would plead for passion to change my lot
But I dwell in a lonely place that love hath forgot"
Great write Rob, thanks for sharing, the above phrase hit a chord with me...
So many poignant lines. Though, I am still hunting for the narrator's flaw. Clearly this love is not forgotten. Thank you for sharing.
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sometimes we just need to be sad and
work our way back to the good moments
again..
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Niah.
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Loved it.
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