Sugar time sweet

Oceanzest

by OceanzestHamilton, Waikato, New Zealand

Jan 11 407 Views 6 comments

Sugar time sweet

Author: Oceanzest

your curls wrap down
in the season of the sun
oh I been waiting, waiting
so long, so long baby
angel dance for me
slow movement in the dark
feel you drawin' a breath
come ride with me, ride with me
been a long time, long time
sugar time sweet
come shut the door
for the night
now you feel its right
I know the rain come down
it come pouring down
washed my blues away
washed my blues away

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Posted: Jan 11

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Comments (6)

Mizzy4

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJan 13

With some bluesy steel guitar and some husky vocals this could sound great in a downtown bar Ocean. Good stuff !

Mick.

salamuna

salamunaDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsJan 13

Me too can hear guitar here, ocean. Lily

carlamee

carlameePlano, Texas USAJan 14

It sounds like the words of a song.

Oceanzest

OceanzestOPHamilton, Waikato New ZealandJan 14

so true folks, I was listening to some blues at the time, maybe I should write a little jingle

salamuna

salamunaDeventer, Overijssel NetherlandsJan 15

why not, ocean?

daradloff

daradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAJan 21

Sounds like a good time with a lot warmer there than here, that's for sure!

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