No waning for sun

by OceanzestHamilton, Waikato, New Zealand

Mar 4 196 Views 5 comments

No waning for the sun

There's no waning for the sun
this is the moon's prerogative
within heavenly drifting cycles
I tie my consciousness to neither
when the land stretches out afar
many can truly journey beneath
search out and adore peace
oh when the men are few
the words are few
simple and fine
like dandelion wine

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Posted: Mar 4

About this poem:

a little entry to keep things moving..

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Comments (5)

lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMar 4

Transcendental blank verse, nice.

online today!

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMar 4

Ocean thanks for your entry, really keeps this corner moving ahead. Between the sun and the moon, nature's gifts can't compete. Either one gives us breathless moments. Loved this and thanks for sharing.SM May the dandelion wine keep you inspired.

OceanzestOPHamilton, Waikato New ZealandMar 5

Thanks LCBR and SM