the huntress

by the cool bluish light
of the LCD screen on her lap
Artimus tiptoes the net
as flesh bends to the bone

she's silently hunting now
a bow at her breast and
her extra long sleep shirt
covering her crossed thighs

where in the vast forest
can she find a take-down,
the prowess prize of fortune,
exposing expertise of hunting

clicking the decoys she
surveys the herd before her
this one, too old and lean
that one, maybe...that one

lone proud stag is racked
quietly before the arrow
pressing the return key,
she knew she never would

© agoodguy2have 2010-06-04
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Posted: Jun 2010

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Comments (7)

caroljoyce
Clever write; you only believe what you percieve though.
Earlgreytea
I loved this, Goodguy, I have always felt that women hunt us, rather than the other way around..., suspicions confirmed...
Happygolucky4u
Oh my. Please point the way to my take-downlaugh I really liked this. I could read it a hundred times bouquet
Redex
Did the huntress catch her prey
Or did he quietly slip away
Nice one!!!dunno wine
hedistuff
perhaps men might wear a bulls-eye upon their person... wait just a moment, we already do!
paloma66
Nice write....But why do you think she hunts for fortune,not all do,its not what brings love & happiness.At times the huntress becomes the hunted.A good woman needs a loving,good charactered ,God fearing fearing man.These qualities are priceless,very desirable.thumbs up bouquet cheers
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - doesn't sound very daunting does she...all warm and cozy with her long sleep shirt, eh?! lol...cool write!cool
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