she's so smokin'

I hunger to touch the way that she feels
she won't open up that heart's inner core
her mettle increases, her shell anneals
a shutout, only leaves me wanting more

there's a sign on the wall, of my desires
some local ordinance says, letters red,
put out those fires, 'cause she's so smokin'

her eyes, her legs, those lips, her hair
can't get next to, can't get beyond blue
just totally captivate, by her beware
my mind in a stew, her body to pursue

there's a sign on the wall, of my desires
some local ordinance says, letters red,
put out those fires, 'cause she's so smokin'

baby I got it so bad, you got it so good
you're a wanton woman gotta hold'a my soul
we could get together, I think we should
make me gain all desire, lose all control

there's a sign on the wall, of my desires
some local ordinance says, letters red,
put out those fires, 'cause she's so smokin'

© agoodguy2have 2010-07-02
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Posted: Jul 2010
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Comments (14)

Happygolucky4u
Do re mi fa so la ti do? Sorry only notes I got going thru my head right nowlaugh I did enjoy your poem. dunno Always a shame to let a fire burn out on its own. conversing
Scher
comfort grin
caroljoyce
I think Rob will say that you need a woman.
trurorob
yep! I will Carol!, its geting worse!!, good write Dave
rob
Redex
Got a bag full of dimes (dames) for you here G>Guyrolling on the floor laughing Liked it
teddybear
Ladybee42
whew..she so smokin' eh? i hope it's not from hitting the breaks too hard!...yea you need a woman - and soon..laugh nice words they're smokin'..laugh applause
tomboygirl
smoking hot goodguydevil

lips
jazzy75
lol...would you care for a texas sized iced tea! lol...i see smoke a blowin'!!devil
cambuff
Made me crave her, hope your not jealous!
Dave
ironman
This has substance
It tells a true story
Everyone can relate to this
Need a woman
So do I
Blessings always
Proudamerican100
laugh oh yes this poem was surely smokin'teddybear
galaxy15
S m o k i n'

G4TP
Earlgreytea
My word, time for 3 cold showers again, the summer heat sure got to some of you bards..., have nercy on us..., lovely, as always...
beautifulyou
Sultry!

Water anyone?

laugh

Nice job goodguy ~ wave
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