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Whiner's Blues

You say that no one loves me.
You whine that they don't care.
Your heart is just a broken mess
Your feelings all laid bare.

The poor me just goes pouring out
Why would love be so unfair.
But unfair to you there is no doubt,
Your love, she doesn't care.

You gave to her all that you had
Although it wasn't much.
And now you feel so very bad
To be treated just as such.

You feel all used and tossed aside.
No longer will you even chat.
Your eyes all red with tears they cried.
Could you be unlovable as that?

So there you're sitting all alone
Eating in the diner
Crying in your empty beer
'Cause no one loves a whiner.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Just some humorous whimsy :)

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Comments (6)

Ladybee42
aww! poor whiner..conversing
bouquet bouquet bouquet
jerseygirl49
CUTE...violin violin playball playball thanks..JG.. wave
gardenhackle
Thanks, ladies. :) bouquet
jeddah12
You say that no one loves me.
You whine that they don't care.
Your heart is just a broken mess
Your feelings all laid bare.

good piece of work sir,,but now youre longer a whiner,lol,with ladybee in your arms,hope no more complains of a whinergrin
nice write and thanks for sharing itcheers wine
niah9online today!
Hi gardenhackle....I found it refreshing it was a male.....enjoyed it..Niahbouquet yay
Gashly
i smile and say cheeeeeeeeese grin <--yep, that's my face, yo. awesome, GH!
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