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nixxo

Dag Of Nag

Deur vensters met krake.
Staar ek harteloos in die ruimte.
Regtig verlore.
Alleen onder die maanlig.
Alleen tweetalig.
Alleen.
Die spieel hang skeef in die gang.
Ek kan myself nie seen nie.
Die spieel is omgedraai.
Dit is nag.
Maar dit is dag.
My oe brand diep in my skedel.
Ek worstel onbepaald met die son.
Dit is die sterre wat my die hulp
aanbied.
Die sterre verstaan die gewig van
my trane.
Dit is dag.
Maar dit is nag.
Die pyn raak te erg.
Die pyn maak my net seer.
Ek kan nie meer voortgaan nie.
Ek wil nie weer agteruit gaan nie.
Maar.
Maar.
Maar.
Sonder jou aan my sy.
Kan ek niks klaarmaak nie.
Die oorlosie teen die muur fluister
saggies.
Met die hand van tyd word ek
gewys.
Dit is al twaalfuur.
Dit is nag.
Maar dit is dag.
Wat maak die tyd saak.
My hart klop te vinnig.
Bloed ontplof diep in my bors.
Kan ek lewendig wees.
Ek begin te twyfel.
Ek mis jou.
Ek is lief vir jou.
Jy is die enigste een wat my dors
les.
Ek is verslaan.
Maar ek doen my beste.
Ek voel soos n dooie hanswors.
Ek staan voor jou graf.
Ek weet nie hoekom nie.
Dit is dag.
Maar dit is nag.
Die probleem is dat ek my naam op
die grafsteen lees.
Oor en oor.
Weer en weer.
My naam kan nie leuens vertel nie.
Ek staar.
Ek staar alleen.
Heeltemal.
Is die werklikheid.
Regtig.
Is ek die gees van ons verlede.
My oe is vol trane.
Dit raak nag.
Maar dit is dag.
Alleen .
Met die donker.
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Posted: Oct 2013
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nixxo

I Love You Babes

I miss you babes -
When I am home -
Surrounded by you crafts -
Mr Dingles is sitting on my lap -
Favourably the skeleton scarecrow -
Which stalks you strawberry supply -
I miss the chocolate mouse, with the dark flavours, you so gently spooned onto my lips -
I love the taste after the taste, the one from your tongue, which splits my mouth to be accepted, by more to your one -
I miss you babes, when you lap by the dance, ontop of me, whispering my name, never stopping, then we play our game -
I miss you more everyday, my love which now is my passion, will never be complete -
I miss you babes when I am down at night, when I feel to the complete in lost, your life came at the price, no God can expect me to do the cost -
I love you babes, I never said those words to you, by the mean, to fulfill your dreams -
Do you hear my screams, I am a fool, I am a fool, what I thought was cool, was not to the measure in you -
I cry, I do not care, I love you babes -
I miss you more everyday -
Open is my heart by thought -
My chances missed -
So I miss you babes -
My mistake, I misjudged, I ringed the finger on your hand, with tears -
You wear the ring to your grave -
I said I do, but somehow, I expected an anwser too -
I miss you babes -
My heart was graved next to you
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Posted: Oct 2013
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Billwillie

The first war

Never will I forget,or should I,
I watched my sisters and brothers turn
The light was not as bright as before,
One third of heavens angels burned
There was no one to guide us then,
We fought friends for the souls of men
The sacrifice in eons made sense,
Now again we must make amends
Where are you,I need you father
I fear you have given up on us now,
Are we not worthy,a begotten daughter,
Michael,Rapheal,Uriel,tell me how?
For I truly can not do that again.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Its about the war in Heaven.Its told by one of the Archangels,I will let each viewer to decide who that is.The loss regret and futility of it all from an angels perspective.
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goodluck26

You Brought Me Back

All was set too far from,Thou love given new Alive....
And thee cant found wounds,By whom and which knives.
But only thee love can put,And things all with Same....
At last found in thou all,Why been here i all came.

But regrets still found thee,And same ask hide past....
And by all mean still go with,All not same,in world vast.
But was wrong with feel same,Each one try to hold Neck....
And was all set leave all hope,Thought of thou brought back.
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Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
Poem is just a humble message to same all,who without any relate with wants to trouble and tease.......and want to make ones life live as hell.
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sandoe33

i need girlfriend

my one love the one i been looking for i hope u been sweet to me i been here just thinking about u so much that i made my heart fall in love with u so dont worry about me but i will tell u that i always been ur only one and its called love
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
its all about love
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Unknown

Perfect Paths

Alone on my perfect paths I sit
observe with clarity the multi-senses around me
wait for prey

Now the wind is my friend
stretching my paths
I watch them resonate
through one of my eyes
It's not yet time to move
sit silent and still

Restless not I
my enduring patience
hunger I feel, more
desire the freedom of
being triggered
to perfectly run
on my perfect paths.
This makes their blood chill

They flutter in my eye-grid
as I nimbly relocate,
seldom am I seen in my logical arrival.
If nothing has disturbed my paths
my work is already half done.
Trapped and tangled
menace alone can kill

All that remains is one sharp prick
finer than a spider's web
and that which once buzzed
and whet my appetite
I wrap in the finest of silk
for none visit me apart from
my perfect guests
entering my home along my perfect paths

Foul weak buzzing foolishness
albeit with sweet tasting juices
Ignorant careless wrecker of perfect paths
lie now still in your silken dinner-jacket

All that remains is one sharp prick
finer than a spider's web
and the buzzing one is gone.
To whet my appetite
I spin the finest of silk
for none visit me apart from
my perfect guests
entering my home along my perfect paths
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Posted: Dec 2014
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Unknown

everything i need

All My Life I've Been The Same Me,
Full Of Life And Strength,
I've Faced Many Obstacles Along The Way,
I Finally Made It Is What I Say,
I've Had Heartaches And Trials That Have Challenged Every Part Of My Being,
But Through It All My Hope And My Faith Is What I Am Seeing,
Changes Have Come All At Once At Times And Sometimes Seem Overwhelming,
My Tears May Fall,my Heart May Break But I Still Have Hope That You Are My Everything,
Just To See You Smile And Feel You Take My Hand,
Helps Me Realize And Understand,
That You Are Everything I Need.
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Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
This Poem Is About Overcoming And Getting To The Point Of Realization That We Go Through Things In Life And Sometimes Look Back And In That Moment We Realize We Are Not Alone.
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DilleyCandid

My Thoughts

<MY THOUGHTS> like BEE GEES....

Thoughts were all that I had, I think I was mad ,because all those crazy times...My thoughts
that come when it wants, to turn into romance or just an insane world, it is only thoughts that drive me to deep hole or take me to the top, anyway it goes....
I know after all those times ,dont smoke cigarette or another stuff.... my girl asked me for a time,and she needs thinks and hope that I understand.....
Well now I think I must tell
all those words i have kept
I can´t bear anymore....Oh my
Thoughts were all that I had
I think I am mad for all those times passed, such thoughts that come and that goes, Baby please dont let me alone, without you is really down... my words are all I have, I think I am mad because all those crazy times, my words
are all that I have, that takes me to rest ,when I get excess. , my thoughts will never let me lone,
it always in my heart , untill I finally die
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Posted: Jun 2015
About this poem:
A different version of bee gees song
thoughts and words that come in my head,
a try to get my words in the songs that I like
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Davy_1985

The Well Of Sadness

I know that you barely noticed,

Strange sadness in my eyes that day,

It was almost like you never saw it,

And it looked like abyss with no end,


My grey eyes reminded you the surface of water,

You felt like looking into deep well,

I am the water and i am solitude down there,

It is where i drown in my own sorrow,


That is what you saw inside this well,

That is actually a little piece of Hell,

I'll show you the invisible dimensions of perception,

It's my soul that shines down there,


It lies buried in this beautiful grave,

That used to be place for hopes and dreams,

Come down and shine together with me,

In this flame so vibrant and pure,


This is how i used to melt our souls together,

And when i look above - i still can see the light,

So pure like my eyes used to be,

In the times when you stil loved me.
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Posted: Oct 2016
About this poem:
I wrote this poem about 2 years ago, i felt kinda depressed - it was autumn just like now so i wrote it, it has not been dedicated to ex or anything like that, jut feelings of mine on the paper
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Fergalgg

the dark side of life

The Inevitability of those that search it
The blame leaches that think they are worth it
Wow es me, its just my luck,
Alas im nice, a usual iq f*ck,
The blame game starts with want,
Followed by blame, friends, them, family and shant,
But its never ones fault for then this leech is visible,
And you see what they want…yours and there life to be both miserable
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Posted: Nov 2015
About this poem:
accolades are nice...aren't they ?
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