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Lower Back Pain
You came to me as a present in the midlle of the night
where everybody sleep in their blanket.
Was pain all over my leg.
Hurt.
O.. My dear
What kind of present are you?
Paracetamol
Ibuprofen
B12
B 1
B6
Neurotropic
Anything
for you
O.. My dear
My beloved Lower Back Pain
2019
where everybody sleep in their blanket.
Was pain all over my leg.
Hurt.
O.. My dear
What kind of present are you?
Paracetamol
Ibuprofen
B12
B 1
B6
Neurotropic
Anything
for you
O.. My dear
My beloved Lower Back Pain
2019
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
I've got Lower Back Pain and its so hurt.2 Million Stars
I saw you sitting in the front of the post office.
You've said that you're waiting for someone.
Someone who will bring you a bag
of 2 million of stars in the sky.
I thought you must be dreaming.
You must be one of that dreamer.
The one who never touch the earth.
And dance in to a circle of life.
I thought you must be someone from another planet
called 'QRCCOZ-1-12'.
You must be one kind of alien
that will destroy humanity.
But i was wrong.
You're really looking for
someone who bring you
that bag.
And i am just a scum bag.
Maybe.
Knowing nothing in your hand.
Or your heart.
Well..i hope your 2 million stars
will made you happy.
Hasta la vista, Amigo.
Jakarta 2019
You've said that you're waiting for someone.
Someone who will bring you a bag
of 2 million of stars in the sky.
I thought you must be dreaming.
You must be one of that dreamer.
The one who never touch the earth.
And dance in to a circle of life.
I thought you must be someone from another planet
called 'QRCCOZ-1-12'.
You must be one kind of alien
that will destroy humanity.
But i was wrong.
You're really looking for
someone who bring you
that bag.
And i am just a scum bag.
Maybe.
Knowing nothing in your hand.
Or your heart.
Well..i hope your 2 million stars
will made you happy.
Hasta la vista, Amigo.
Jakarta 2019
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
I looking at the sky outside my room and its dark. *Ok, it was night*I think we need 2 million stars to made it bright. LOL.
Liebes Gedicht
Ich spuck dir ins Gesicht
Ich hasse diese Seite
Denn hier trifftnur schiese
ich esse döner
und du fisch
ich bin gut
du nicht
Ich hasse diese Seite
Denn hier trifftnur schiese
ich esse döner
und du fisch
ich bin gut
du nicht
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Posted: Jul 2019
About this poem:
Ich liebve es
911
After the disaster
my heartbreaks,
Simply struck
by a swan gliding
over Mirror Lake.
These are moments
I awake!
Surprising me passed
Time and Space.
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my heartbreaks,
Simply struck
by a swan gliding
over Mirror Lake.
These are moments
I awake!
Surprising me passed
Time and Space.
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Posted: Jan 2022
About this poem:
The term aesthetic arrest was first used by James Joyce in his book A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. The philosopher, historian and theologian Joseph Campbell, also a Joyce scholar, explained aesthetic arrest as,"A simple beholding of the object... you experience a radiance. You are held in aesthetic arrest. This radiance, the perception of beauty, is regarded as a communication of the hidden power behind the world, shining through some physical form."
online today!The Castle on the Hill
The castle on the hill's consciousness dreamed
Of a new era, where time itself stands still
In this vortex where light and life is well met
Throughout the age of history, imposters might apply
With swords that parry, coinside with the scholar's pen
Warring words that might cause conflict deep inside
The walls of this castle that has withstood the sweat
Built from man's own hands and against the oceans' wave
Weathered but beaten conflict, strength within, pride comes
Before the fall, that questions the ownership of mine
Discernment made, as to who sits on that silver throne
Picking up the pieces of the jigsaw, as the debris
That was once called home
And its this castle particularly that has secrets to hide
Concealment trapped in its own kin lies, a traitor among us
Setting a trail of embers, as the phoenix does indeed emerge
Tornados of fire that clear the path through the conflict free
Leaving the travellers on the path aware in its wake
After making the resolute decision that these travellers make
Hearts heavy, they turn back towards home, knowing
That nobody in this time can pick up their mobile 'phones
By the ember that rises higher with the breeze
Bringing the traitor in question down to his knees
The travellers, warriors in their own making, stated
And created a warm fire bursting forth from the pit of their bellies
Wading through the wreckage and healing through the swelling
A pen that wields swords with magnimamous wit
That can parry as any warrior can with inspiration, tremendously lit
Will fire the hearts of many that read this through with warmth from above
That feeling which unites us is indeed called
Love
Of a new era, where time itself stands still
In this vortex where light and life is well met
Throughout the age of history, imposters might apply
With swords that parry, coinside with the scholar's pen
Warring words that might cause conflict deep inside
The walls of this castle that has withstood the sweat
Built from man's own hands and against the oceans' wave
Weathered but beaten conflict, strength within, pride comes
Before the fall, that questions the ownership of mine
Discernment made, as to who sits on that silver throne
Picking up the pieces of the jigsaw, as the debris
That was once called home
And its this castle particularly that has secrets to hide
Concealment trapped in its own kin lies, a traitor among us
Setting a trail of embers, as the phoenix does indeed emerge
Tornados of fire that clear the path through the conflict free
Leaving the travellers on the path aware in its wake
After making the resolute decision that these travellers make
Hearts heavy, they turn back towards home, knowing
That nobody in this time can pick up their mobile 'phones
By the ember that rises higher with the breeze
Bringing the traitor in question down to his knees
The travellers, warriors in their own making, stated
And created a warm fire bursting forth from the pit of their bellies
Wading through the wreckage and healing through the swelling
A pen that wields swords with magnimamous wit
That can parry as any warrior can with inspiration, tremendously lit
Will fire the hearts of many that read this through with warmth from above
That feeling which unites us is indeed called
Love
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Posted: Nov 6
About this poem:
inspirationMountain full of Gold
A mountain full of gold, just double it up but still won’t be enough for a man
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Posted: Nov 6
About this poem:
Is a music like I toke as a poem
THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY
Have you ever wondered what would have happened if Adam had stood up for Eve instead of blaming her by saying it was that woman you gave me?
I mean that was a pretty ungrateful thing to say to God.
What would have happened if he took accountability...
The Bible states in Genesis that he was with her
If he could actually see the gift that she was from God to him and in turn protected her from being beguiled by Satan instead of blaming her as he did, especially as he was with her.
Plus blaming God for giving her to him in the first place.
I wonder if he had a little bit of humility, would we be in the same place as we are now?
I hope you enjoy this little playlet and it helps us reflect on our human condition.
THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY
God: Adam, Where is eve?
Adam: My Lord she is behind the fig tree
God: Adam, ask her to show herself to me
Adam: My Lord she cannot
God: Why will she not show herself to me?
Adam: She is ashamed
God: Why is she ashamed?
Adam: A serpent appeared to her and deceived her my Lord
God: And this serpent what did he do?
Adam: He tricked her my Lord, I should have been there for her.
God: How did he trick her Adam?
Adam: He told her she would not die if she were to eat of the forbidden fruit
God: And what happened Adam?
Adam: She took of the fruit and ate, my Lord, I am so sorry!
God: And you Adam did you partake of the fruit?
Adam: After Eve partook of the forbidden fruit she offered some for me to taste
God: And did you taste the fruit Adam?
Adam: I was tempted Lord having seen Eve had not died, yet I could not partake
God: What stopped you my son?
Adam: Eve was snared and deceived I was not, I would have had to be deliberately
disobedient to eat of this fruit
God: Yes indeed Eve was tricked and deceived, It could have so easily have been you
Adam: Yes my Lord I know, that is why I beg you My Lord spare her life
God: I am so sorry Adam I cannot; the wages for sin is death
Adam: Oh no my Lord please let her live for she is bone of my bone and flesh of my flesh
God: I know Adam but you both knew my law
Adam: I shall be alone lord for there is no mate in all of the earth for me, every living Creature you have set before me has its mate
God: I shall create you another
Adam: I know you can Lord but I don't want another, I want Eve
God: I know you do Adam but Eve must die
Adam: But I love her Lord
God: I know you do and so do I
Adam: So please I beg you don't let her die
God: I am so sorry Adam she has to die
Adam: Lord is there any other way?
God: Someone has to pay the price for sin
Adam: Then let it be I Lord; let me die in place of Eve
God: You do truly love her my son, then you shall take the place of Eve.
***********************
And so it was that Adam took the place of Eve, he dies that she may live & He bore her sin; yet because Adam had never sinned, death could not bind him and he was resurrected & Eve was restored.
As we are well aware this conversation did not happen in Genesis between the 1st Adam and God, Yet throughout the bible we see this interaction between the 2nd Adam and God the Father.
Unlike the 1st Adam, the second Adam being Our Lord Jesus Christ who loved us so much He was willing to bear all our sins to restore us back to His Father.
By one man the human race fell
And by one man the human race is restored
God is calling us to love like this, for there is no grater love than a man lay down his life for another. ©
I mean that was a pretty ungrateful thing to say to God.
What would have happened if he took accountability...
The Bible states in Genesis that he was with her
If he could actually see the gift that she was from God to him and in turn protected her from being beguiled by Satan instead of blaming her as he did, especially as he was with her.
Plus blaming God for giving her to him in the first place.
I wonder if he had a little bit of humility, would we be in the same place as we are now?
I hope you enjoy this little playlet and it helps us reflect on our human condition.
THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY
God: Adam, Where is eve?
Adam: My Lord she is behind the fig tree
God: Adam, ask her to show herself to me
Adam: My Lord she cannot
God: Why will she not show herself to me?
Adam: She is ashamed
God: Why is she ashamed?
Adam: A serpent appeared to her and deceived her my Lord
God: And this serpent what did he do?
Adam: He tricked her my Lord, I should have been there for her.
God: How did he trick her Adam?
Adam: He told her she would not die if she were to eat of the forbidden fruit
God: And what happened Adam?
Adam: She took of the fruit and ate, my Lord, I am so sorry!
God: And you Adam did you partake of the fruit?
Adam: After Eve partook of the forbidden fruit she offered some for me to taste
God: And did you taste the fruit Adam?
Adam: I was tempted Lord having seen Eve had not died, yet I could not partake
God: What stopped you my son?
Adam: Eve was snared and deceived I was not, I would have had to be deliberately
disobedient to eat of this fruit
God: Yes indeed Eve was tricked and deceived, It could have so easily have been you
Adam: Yes my Lord I know, that is why I beg you My Lord spare her life
God: I am so sorry Adam I cannot; the wages for sin is death
Adam: Oh no my Lord please let her live for she is bone of my bone and flesh of my flesh
God: I know Adam but you both knew my law
Adam: I shall be alone lord for there is no mate in all of the earth for me, every living Creature you have set before me has its mate
God: I shall create you another
Adam: I know you can Lord but I don't want another, I want Eve
God: I know you do Adam but Eve must die
Adam: But I love her Lord
God: I know you do and so do I
Adam: So please I beg you don't let her die
God: I am so sorry Adam she has to die
Adam: Lord is there any other way?
God: Someone has to pay the price for sin
Adam: Then let it be I Lord; let me die in place of Eve
God: You do truly love her my son, then you shall take the place of Eve.
***********************
And so it was that Adam took the place of Eve, he dies that she may live & He bore her sin; yet because Adam had never sinned, death could not bind him and he was resurrected & Eve was restored.
As we are well aware this conversation did not happen in Genesis between the 1st Adam and God, Yet throughout the bible we see this interaction between the 2nd Adam and God the Father.
Unlike the 1st Adam, the second Adam being Our Lord Jesus Christ who loved us so much He was willing to bear all our sins to restore us back to His Father.
By one man the human race fell
And by one man the human race is restored
God is calling us to love like this, for there is no grater love than a man lay down his life for another. ©
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Posted: May 2022
Post Commentonline today!The Performance of a Lifetime
The performance started when the conductor raises his baton with a swish
Providing the orchestra with direction, and the audience awaits with bated breath
Listening to the unique sounds of this masterpiece being reborn, born again
With avid fascination, as the strings create an appealing sound that takes you
On a journey through the masses of musical creation
Its a journey where the notes glide into a hauntingly beautiful respective melody
That casts a spell on your imagination and listening ear to keep up with such
A compellingly consistent pulsing beat, much like the rhythmic throb of your heart
Navigating the waters of consciousness in this magical union of musical voices
Known to man and its in this moment, you are reunited with the power of harmony
Resonating with the dissonance of passionate inspiration that breaths a new
Life into your listening ear, you are educated in the throes of classical music
Knowing yourself that you are enjoying this moment of truth and are spellbound
By the notes of this symphony
Though deep down in your heart, you know that all journeys come to a reluctant end, even though the possibilities are endless, and which pave the path forwards
Into a new beginning so that the magic can happen in another futuristic moment in time, captured by one man and his orchestra.
Providing the orchestra with direction, and the audience awaits with bated breath
Listening to the unique sounds of this masterpiece being reborn, born again
With avid fascination, as the strings create an appealing sound that takes you
On a journey through the masses of musical creation
Its a journey where the notes glide into a hauntingly beautiful respective melody
That casts a spell on your imagination and listening ear to keep up with such
A compellingly consistent pulsing beat, much like the rhythmic throb of your heart
Navigating the waters of consciousness in this magical union of musical voices
Known to man and its in this moment, you are reunited with the power of harmony
Resonating with the dissonance of passionate inspiration that breaths a new
Life into your listening ear, you are educated in the throes of classical music
Knowing yourself that you are enjoying this moment of truth and are spellbound
By the notes of this symphony
Though deep down in your heart, you know that all journeys come to a reluctant end, even though the possibilities are endless, and which pave the path forwards
Into a new beginning so that the magic can happen in another futuristic moment in time, captured by one man and his orchestra.
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Posted: Jul 2022
About this poem:
This poem is comprised from listening to Karl Jenkins masterpieces of Adiemus and Palladium, just introspection coined at the time of a musical journey.light horse
the Australian light horse did as they could
were dropped on a beach where they never have should
they held the hills and stood, stood,stood
when they where asked for more , they all said they would
these great Australian's fought hard and long
for what they stand for they where never wrong
for ever in our thoughts these brave men will never be gone
this strength is what we have left of them to go on.
were dropped on a beach where they never have should
they held the hills and stood, stood,stood
when they where asked for more , they all said they would
these great Australian's fought hard and long
for what they stand for they where never wrong
for ever in our thoughts these brave men will never be gone
this strength is what we have left of them to go on.
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
tribute to ozzie light horsefrom a355074
retired
bed
as i sit here on my bed
all these thoughts go round my head
many tears have i shed
now i sit i start to cry
over the night that you die
where you ill and did you lie
reliving things from the past
memory's that long will last
no more dark shadows can be cast
sad and alone here i sit
am running low and out of wit
really dont know anymore where i fit.
all these thoughts go round my head
many tears have i shed
now i sit i start to cry
over the night that you die
where you ill and did you lie
reliving things from the past
memory's that long will last
no more dark shadows can be cast
sad and alone here i sit
am running low and out of wit
really dont know anymore where i fit.
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
is now 3 months since my wife amanda died.just writing stuff.
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