Acrostic

Why birds fly in the sky
How do they manage to do it,
Or is it wonder?
Red is the sun, white are the clouds,
Eagles are bold and coward the mice!
And I'm sitting here, thinking of
Dunes, also of peaches, beaches and
Sand, ah how exciting
The dreams are at night!
Is it a dream or is it for real,
Is it my body or is it my soul?
A long series of questions
For my little head!
Ooze of questions, and where is the man whose
Love will bring the answers of them?
Butterfly, butterfly, tell me
Who he is, tell me
Where he is and how does he long for my
Red juicy lips!
Oh God how can I wait?
Temptation in me, but he is too late!
Itchy my feet, wet are my eyes
Tweeting the birds, but
Ice is my heart...


* Acrostic is a poem or other form of writing in which the first letter, syllable or word of each line, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out a word or a message.

** Sorry for my lame poetry, just wanted to try this poetic form!
innocent doh

*** Comments in acrostic, if possible! wow grinyay
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Comments (86)

Utopian society
Never will be
Due to human nature
Everyone wanting
Refusing to give
Call it greed
Or human survival
Very blunt
Even criminal
Really is our nature

I salute
Some people

For they can
Utilize their heart
Needing nothing but giving all

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Shay no worries, it's an honor for me to be quoted by you! Well I'm trying to get if the acrostic-making effort hasn't completely drained my brain till now!laugh hug bouquet
Wow Still! wow wow wow Great meaning and acrostic :)) And yes acrostic is a way to say things under cover having fun! laugh thumbs up thumbs up
lol, couldn't help myself on that one bouquet
It's called inspiration, Still wink innocent thumbs up
It is nice and sunny

Love is everywhere
I feel like being funny
Keen to have affair
Either online or in real

Yesterday I thought
Of someone
Usually so dear
Remote or near

But he never came
Looking for his dame
Oh, what a shame
Good that I've finished this poem


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