Acrostic

Why birds fly in the sky
How do they manage to do it,
Or is it wonder?
Red is the sun, white are the clouds,
Eagles are bold and coward the mice!
And I'm sitting here, thinking of
Dunes, also of peaches, beaches and
Sand, ah how exciting
The dreams are at night!
Is it a dream or is it for real,
Is it my body or is it my soul?
A long series of questions
For my little head!
Ooze of questions, and where is the man whose
Love will bring the answers of them?
Butterfly, butterfly, tell me
Who he is, tell me
Where he is and how does he long for my
Red juicy lips!
Oh God how can I wait?
Temptation in me, but he is too late!
Itchy my feet, wet are my eyes
Tweeting the birds, but
Ice is my heart...


* Acrostic is a poem or other form of writing in which the first letter, syllable or word of each line, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out a word or a message.

** Sorry for my lame poetry, just wanted to try this poetic form!
innocent doh

*** Comments in acrostic, if possible! wow grinyay
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Comments (86)

wow that is very good.... well in a twisted way but still wow!
Lindz, thank you very much but it's a silly joke laugh hug
Really wow wow wow wow laugh
I wonder what the other parts are laugh
you cant expect me to exploit myself like that in a public forum hole
kind of: Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.laugh
Unless i lost something on the road. Must be the beerblushing
I see, you just show a little bit of your twisted self here like an iceberg laugh devil
Icons no you didn't lose anything in your beer laugh
yes thats it no matter what big of a person you are, run into me and you will sink lol.
in afrikaans we say "diepe water, stille grond, onder draai die buiwel rond." deep waters, still grounds, underneath the devil lingers...
Standing strong
I say to you
Love those who are dear
Live life today as though tomorrow doesn't exist
It is full of wonder
Now is the time
End all sorrow
Seize the day
Smile

cool
Wosw Lindz this sounds much better than my acrostic laugh wow wow Hmm and we say here: Tihite vodai sa nai-dulboki! ("The quiet waters are the deepest ones!") So there is a devil there too? wink
but we have the devil in our waters lolrolling on the floor laughing
sorry i didnt notice the little devil lol
Red:

This is something I can never deny!
And you are a smart girl, a
Kitty and tigress, red
Youth in the sky! doh laugh bouquet
You didn't notice the little devils maybe because yours are big laugh comfort
The last comment was @ Lindz :)
well big yes but you know what they say... the bigger they are...
No I don't know this Lindz... So go on, please grin
i hoped that yould know... just wanted to sound smart by posting that qoute as that the only part i knowlaugh
You're too kind
Well, I must say!
Calm and cool like the raindrops
Of an otherwise wild and stormy day
Most appreciative of your
Effortless flow of words.



wave
Lindz now one for you for keeping me company:

Larger the devil
Is, more dangerous and
Naughty he is,
Damn it, what a big devil, he must have been
Zoomed!
wow wow wow wow doh laugh
"You're too kind
Well, I must say!
Calm and cool like the raindrops
Of an otherwise wild and stormy day
Most appreciative of your
Effortless flow of words."
Red, thank you! These are the most beautiful words ever spoken to me!blushing

laugh

You're good!tip hat
Icons very mad very mad very mad laugh
Roses are red, Violets are blue, here is a poem, just for you ! . . .confused . . . If I was any good, At posting this stuff, I woldn't have to send you, All this " fluff " ! . . . . . .. . . . . .laugh laugh laugh
Lovely Icons
Listen closely
I will whisper to you
To you only
What thoughts cross your mind?
Am I being clear?
Silly man
Fast to speak
Only listen now...listen closely
Rest assured
Ariel was the recipient of those words

laugh wink
does a man
afiliate him self
more often with the
naughty nature
Ingraved in the entity
also asociated with
mans one true enimy
based on what the bible
invisions as the one and only
great evil that plagues the world?
sorry it terrible but its my first try
Of course Red: LOL was for Ariel. The essence was for me!laugh
I knew i got it right. Right from the start!grin
Icons
Wh
y you so mysterious?
At least answer that
Are you really who you say you are?
My mind is spinning
I am dying to know
Tell me please
Or are you scared?
Do you care?
Who are you really?
It is plain to see
Hold that thought
Yes, I know you
Only for your eyes...
UMF...you know meblushing

wink lips
Red laugh wow wow thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up Which man can resist to these brilliant and witty verses! Not Icons! smitten love laugh hug bouquet
Ariel laugh blushing thumbs up
Lindz it's great! A philosophical poem with Biblical reminiscencewow wow wow wow thumbs up hug
Red typical for men to think the world spins around them laugh flex conversing
Men will be men, ariel.....but I'm not sure typical would be the appropriate word in his case wink wave
Ah I think you know it better Red! innocent wink
I'll never tell wink cool
Even in acrostic? innocent roll eyes laugh
Even in acrostic wink laugh
Red you are even more mysterious than Icons mumbling roll eyes laugh wave
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