Acrostic
Why birds fly in the skyHow do they manage to do it,
Or is it wonder?
Red is the sun, white are the clouds,
Eagles are bold and coward the mice!
And I'm sitting here, thinking of
Dunes, also of peaches, beaches and
Sand, ah how exciting
The dreams are at night!
Is it a dream or is it for real,
Is it my body or is it my soul?
A long series of questions
For my little head!
Ooze of questions, and where is the man whose
Love will bring the answers of them?
Butterfly, butterfly, tell me
Who he is, tell me
Where he is and how does he long for my
Red juicy lips!
Oh God how can I wait?
Temptation in me, but he is too late!
Itchy my feet, wet are my eyes
Tweeting the birds, but
Ice is my heart...
* Acrostic is a poem or other form of writing in which the first letter, syllable or word of each line, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out a word or a message.
** Sorry for my lame poetry, just wanted to try this poetic form!
*** Comments in acrostic, if possible!
Comments (86)
out of norme
utterly
rover
Over the mountains
forests and rivers
Thick is the ice
horrible may be the
ending trapped
Mindless resquer
Immersed will subdue
Nautical silent scream
Drifting both, though
and take it by the roots
to atempt to weed, the words that
are so clear, and this by
you i fear. there might be more
going on. more made
unclear.
yuo should take some time
sit back and bring it all in line.
talk all you want
in the end all ccan see what itss all
about
and you are getting better and better, even than your teacher (me
and over anylising this.
1 a
2 cr
2 az
1 y
3 obs
3 ese
1 d
2 mi
3 n...d
and subjets matter in corelation to the cross line wrighten,
with a suiteble rhyme sceam
Well, I am impressed...
Once again.
Nicely done.
Distance, though still prevails
Even when the need is so great.
Rest assured, my dear Icons...
Flames will continue to burn.
UMF will still linger...
Like a moth to those flames.
Lift your wings.
its o.c.d. i tent to anelise everything and they combenations and get it perfect, untill i get it perfect and only i know what i meant by it with mesages and codes ingraved everywhere along with double meanings...
it horrible having obsesive compulsive disorder lol...
now im going to sit up all night with pen and paper lol
Behold the tiny,
enormous to your mind
attrocity is the kiss
undone yet performed
thus you may find
inevitable and
frantic seeking out the
ultimate journey
latitudes explodes
Modified. Atoms
indulging the waves
navigators on liquid
dreams ever flowed
You hold!
Good night
I personally have never written poems, as far as I remember these are my first ones but I was joking when writing them
Everyone
It's
Darn
Inviting Here.
Can't you see how beautiful
And sweet she is, like the
Lilacs blossoming in May,
Like the rainbow smiling from the sky,
In this lovely spring day!
Of the dating site
What the pleasant trends
Are things that you write
Ringing softly in my
Ears and in the air
Your poems like birds fly
Uttering love so nice and fair
Nice poem and nice blog, Jana
I often take a break
And look through the window to see the world
Moving and spinning around!
Feeling the same
In this blossoming spring, I just try
Not to get dizzy, but to take it
Easy!