8:46 AM Revisited

As I drive my usual route to work,
I noticed the usual things:
Houses nicely painted;
Lawns green in spite of the drought,
Neatly mowed and groomed;
People alone in their cars
Staring blankly into the future,
Connecting only with the mechanical red lights
Which impede their progress
While working to keep them safe.

Then I see American flags,
Dozens, one on each fence post
Surrounding the Endicott Estate.
They wave in the strong breeze
Under ominous clouds
Which threaten the calm of
One of the last days of summer.
One flag has been shaken loose
From its tape mooring and
Hangs limply as it is tossed to and fro.

I resist the urge to pull over to the side,
Get out of my car and
Reposition it to be upright and tall.
Something inside of me wants
That imperfect image to last –
To recognize the vulnerability
Of even the most powerful
The most generous and showy -
To point out the dangers of
Arrogance and false pride.

It is 8:46 AM.
This moment is colored with tears.

***

If my world were to end today,
I would like to have given you a call.
I would love to have given you a hug and kiss
To tell you how much I love you.

The moment of silence is over.
Our future now begins.
May we be kind and loving care-takers
Of the Universe, each other and ourselves.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
In honor and memory of all who sacrifice for a better world. May the travesty of the twin towers remind us of what evil can do when it is not countered by love.

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hariksna
Enjoying the sun
Enjoying the breeze
Enjoying the clouds above
With relentless spirit and passion
May that flag dance in selflessness...

Beautiful piece dear....
Gashly
sad flower for the mourning
bouquet for the hope

thank you...for capturing the feeling i couldn't put into words this morning. teddybear
Redex
In honour and memory of all who sacrifice for a better world, this writing is indeed a trubute to them for there are many all over the earth. Thankyou for sharingthumbs up
freeatlast64847
Great write gnj! Here's to a better tomorrow! wine
gnj4u
Hi, hariksna, Gashly, Redex and freeatlast64847,
I am forever grateful to those who paid and to those who continue to pay a price for us to live free within a just society. Today we remember and mourn those lost. "Here's to a better tomorrow!"
beautifulyou
"May we be kind and loving care-takers
Of the Universe, each other and ourselves."



Yes, indeed, may we ... rose

...Ty for that beautiful statement gnj4u.




teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, beautifulyou,
Thank you for your kind comment and sharing in moments of remembrance.
caroljoyce
All that is power is just part of an illusion and 'ev..l' is just separation from light and a complete misunderstanding and is only temporary.
With your last stanza, I am in accordance.

CJthumbs up angel
ironman
A wonderful descriptive poem
Our future now begins
Constant changes
technology makeup cultures music
time capsule
Blessings and love always
Positive thoughts
angel
gnj4u
Hi, ironman,
Thank you very much for your kind comments and your blessings.
agoodguy2have
GNJ, thank you for reminding us all that pride is a two-way street and we all can be kind and loving care-takers to ourselves, our families, our countries, all people and the planet too! ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Thank you for your comment. Yes, whether one begins with the universe and works inward to self or begins with self and proceeds outward to "infinity and beyond" loving care need to be the buzz words of the present and future.
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