Wow! I am truly impressed with your work here! absolutely billiant and a pleasure to read! Thanks!
zeus911Malta, Xlokk MaltaOct 6, 2010
it takes an able pen to draw out such images while keeping your lines in perspective... Great write and certainly one augers as the shape of things to come!
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAOct 6, 2010
Wonderful poem. I love the last line, it's the size that makes our peace a thing to prize. So true. This for me is one of your best poems yet. Thank you for sharing.
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 6, 2010
serenity now, goodguy...food for thought, as if everything else is all that matters. that one sticks to the ribs. really well done, thanks for sharing.
peace comes in many shapes and sizes - one does not fit all or does it? thought provoking geometry...
SummervanillaMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 6, 2010
so whatever we find to be the shape of peace let's work to make its size increase
Well said, AGG2H
rebeccakelly78victoria, Victoria AustraliaOct 7, 2010
a loved this poem i have no idea why reading it relaxed me. I thought it was beautiful
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 7, 2010
Ahh spiriual cake. The best kind. No calories...
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 8, 2010
A really clever poem and thanyou for you comment about silence. It inspired me somewhat.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKOct 8, 2010
All of it, I imagine. From small wishes of good intent greatness grows as we are all creators. Thanks for astounding the republic yet again with your mathematically precise spirituality.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 8, 2010
I want to say that this is so well written, without it seeming patronising, but, it IS So Well Written my friend, well done! Well said,......Andrew...
Comments (12)
let's work to make its size increase
Well said, AGG2H
I thought it was beautiful