the shape

is it some sort of equilateral angle
with a sharp turn that gets us entangled

is it some multi-faceted polyhedron
i'm sure we could face it, and need one

is it an ancient mystical pyramid tall
with rhymes and runes in chiseled wall

is it a never ending Möbius strip
with endless edge, a continuous trip

is it a futuristic geodesic sphere
a better world in the future near

is it some mathematician's donut
that makes us plain laymen go nuts

is it a speck, some miniscule dot
to fill empty space, we'll need a lot

is it a long line from time before
that to future time, is never more

maybe around its smooth crystal globe
our thoughts reflective in temporal lobe

whatever its shape it now seems in tatters
as if everything else is all that matters

so whatever we find to be the shape of peace
let's work to make its size increase

it is not so much the shape, but its size
that makes our peace a thing to prize

© agoodguy2have 2010-10-04
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
file under food...spiritual food.

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Comments (12)

QuietStormF
Wow! I am truly impressed with your work here! absolutely billiant and a pleasure to read! Thanks! applause cheering teddybear bouquet
zeus911
it takes an able pen to draw out such images while keeping your lines in perspective... Great write and certainly one augers as the shape of things to come! thumbs up angel
Pinkpoetress
Wonderful poem. I love the last line, it's the size that makes our peace a thing to prize. So true. This for me is one of your best poems yet. Thank you for sharing.
Gashly
serenity now, goodguy...food for thought, as if everything else is all that matters. that one sticks to the ribs. really well done, thanks for sharing.
Ladybee42
peace comes in many shapes and sizes - one does not fit all or does it? thought provoking geometry...thumbs up
bouquet bouquet bouquet
Summervanilla
so whatever we find to be the shape of peace
let's work to make its size increase

Well said, AGG2H thumbs up
rebeccakelly78
a loved this poem i have no idea why reading it relaxed me.
I thought it was beautiful
freeatlast64847
Ahh spiriual cake. The best kind. No calories... beer
Macduff5
A really clever poem and thanyou for you comment about silence. It inspired me somewhat.
caroljoyce
All of it, I imagine. From small wishes of good intent greatness grows as we are all creators. Thanks for astounding the republic yet again with your mathematically precise spirituality.
andrew149
I want to say that this is so well written, without it seeming patronising, but, it IS So Well Written my friend, well done! Well said,......Andrew...cool
hariksna
Rhythm is an integral element to yoour poems....someone said you have a mighty pen...I should say you have a mightier keyboard...
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