There’s a softness in the air, a transcendence Tempering the harsh edges of unified thought Lifting the dark polarity into purified streams of light
Brightness bridges are being made from careful construct created from kindness thoughts and lofty intentions So that tenderness can kiss each entity wide awake
Bliss is streaming forth into the deliberate consciousness Blending into deep passion with dreams from the created real Feelings are set alive, freed from constraints of unwise minds
Love is seeping into the seams of every soul Diffusing down via the aura through the crown Becoming merged and blissful in the body physical
She is dancing with tender now in the bright new reflection Mirroring the essence and image of all that is Causing the dark to quietly fade into its own illusion.
Hi, caroljoyce, Oh, to live in a world where Love is seeping into the seams of every soul and be able to rejoice and watch the dark to quietly fade into its own illusion. Surely, what Bliss!
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandOct 22, 2010
Love the last two stanzas,Love does find its way to every soul.Lots of love.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 22, 2010
Love is seeping into the seams of every soul Diffusing down via the aura through the crown Becoming merged and blissful in the body physical
love love love CJ,excellent and lovely write thanks for sharing it
gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandOct 22, 2010
oh, sublime serenity, where dreamers, can dream there dreams, you whisper it to me with your poetic verse, caroljoyce, you of the soft flowing words,,,, i liked it is what i mean to say, LOL
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 22, 2010
Thanks for sharing this very poetic and uplifting piece. You have been so generous in your comments and I can see where this positiveness comes from. Poetry can be such a healing thing especially if it is shared.
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 23, 2010
Estarte rules! The Mother is alive and well and speaking through CJ! Great write!
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAOct 23, 2010
Wonderful poem, Caroljoyce. So soft and tender. I loved it. Thank you.
serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 23, 2010
Love is seeping into the seams of every soul
well carol you do write some brilliant poetry so etched in delicate splendour..as the line above.. great job..
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 23, 2010
...freed from the constraints of unwise minds. perfect, cj...keep spreading the warmth, as you do it so delicately, and so well.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 23, 2010
'Brightness Bridges'! That's unbelievable CJ! Your creative expressions spun me around. The whole concept is quite profound.. Love it..And such a deep loving sentiment infused.. cafe'
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusOct 23, 2010
"Love is seeping into the seams of every soul"
Another masterpiece, soul-sister, thanks for sharing, I loved it...
beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 23, 2010
God, CJ, I LOVE this write...
It's absolutely gorgeous ... and "So that tenderness can kiss each entity wide awake"
To the darkness, quietly fading into its own illusion...
coooool! i always try to comment on your poetry without looking at what others say because you can have many meanings in a few words. i love this - it made me imagine ghosts of the adjectives! actually giving them a slightly visible projection - very cool and very lovely write, thanks CJ
That was one soothing light read. Thank you for the reflection
ChasingCarsCrappy Thrappy, Northamptonshire, England UKOct 23, 2010
I sense the half somnolent dreamyness of this. You write well, gentle without descending into mush. It does what it says it's going to do o the tin in a crafted way. Hat doffed to you ma'am.
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Oh, to live in a world where Love is seeping into the seams of every soul and be able to rejoice and watch the dark to quietly fade into its own illusion. Surely, what Bliss!
Diffusing down via the aura through the crown
Becoming merged and blissful in the body physical
love love love CJ,excellent and lovely write
thanks for sharing it
well carol you do write some brilliant poetry so etched in delicate splendour..as the line above.. great job..
Another masterpiece, soul-sister, thanks for sharing, I loved it...
It's absolutely gorgeous ... and
"So that tenderness can kiss each entity wide awake"
To the darkness, quietly fading into its own illusion...
So powerful!!!