Bitter-sweet Missing

Plaintive and inexorable the last day drags us towards to its flat end.
Time, imperious and merciless points with bony fingers towards the deadline
And the atmosphere breathes down heavily with dread of separation.
The energy In the house sighs and slides with suppressed sadness
And my brain presses against the physical constraints of reality.
Fear drips slowly from my consciousness saddening the dank, limp November leaves
Whilst Solitude compresses my skull and the strange silence rings in my ears.
Missing you sorrow steadily whispers in timed staccato memories
As I roam disconsolate and disconnected through rooms that caressed time together.
Now empty of love, the walls are watched by familiar items standing guard
And I am followed listlessly by the tender wistful ghosts of our kisses.
Little splinters of loss break loose from my mind and stab the tender confines of my heart,
I curl tightly under the cold creased covers, yet there is no shelter without your warmth.
I seek the absence of sleep and my dreams curve around the gentle sweetness of your soul.
I cannot swallow for the missing you
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Posted: Nov 2010

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mike7375
Great piece of writing, so expressive, could feel the loss from here.
kle76am
I felt ur pain so cleary it was as if I had recently someone. Great write CJ
gotitall
how wonderfully sad, it drips sadness, it moved me, carol, i can but hope for happier days, for your gentle heart, ben.
hedistuff
well...this is, despondent. many of the comps sound quite original. how are you?
freeatlast64847
Beautifully poignant! My heart goes out to you. hug
jeddah12
a very hearted write and sad,im with you cj,,very well pennede,,thanks for sharing and cheer up my dear,another trials in lifehug bouquet sad flower
SCatlyn
This is beautiful, insightful... & heart-wrenching. "...splinters of loss break loose from my mind and stab the tender confines of my heart".
So real; a heartfelt, deep description of walking through days of loss.
Wonderful writing.. sad flower rose rose
kickit22
to roam in a home where the ghosts of the lost love that once filled the air is so heart wrenching. the empty ness sometimes gets too be to much.'
beautiful write to a sad reality.bouquet
Redex
First off missed you around carol. The tile is so apt, pulled from deep within this is a wonderful write, of loss, stirs onehug
caroljoyce
Thank you everyone for such generous comments and concern. I really did not intend to depress anyone. Nothing terribly bad has happened, just truly missing a dear person I finally got to spend time with recently and maximising my 'poetic licence'.I am sure I shall survive it!
CJsad flower
agoodguy2have
CJ, a lamentable write of high poetic license with the melancholic presence reminiscent of the Brontë sisters. Well done. ;-(
Ladybee42
i kept 'missing' this poem and beautiful it is! so glad i finally got to read it properly..hug bouquet bouquet bouquet
Pinkpoetress
Carol,
Wonderful poem, though sad. I hope you are alright. Take care.
kle76am
The Missed is a blessed person I can feel it through your words Caroljoyce but take heart we learn to live with the missing though we never truly get pass ithandshake comfort
jvaski
"It is better to have loved and lost - than never loved at all"
dunno
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