There is a low keening sound Carried through the air on waves of sorrow Pure, incessant notes of loss For love cannot be heard
Her spirit weaves its delicate tread Tiptoes between the graves of dead hopes Surveys all damage for her sake For love cannot be perceived
Her ghost wails for infants born in her name Generation upon generation Each named with hope of lasting For love cannot be enacted
Her reflection gazes through the mirror of longing Illusions only are seen in return Smeared and distorted with disappointments For love cannot be understood
Needing and wanting mimic her soft voice Desire and lust clutch greedily at her garments Yet none will prevail For love cannot be imitated
C.J. it takes a keen mind with a keen soul to write so sorrowful a lament as this, i can hear her wailing deeply in her grief. Whether heard, perceived, enacted, or understood, it truly cannot be imitated.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USASep 3, 2010
Hi, caroljoyce, What sorrow! We feel her pain as she Tiptoes between the graves of dead hopes. May the graveyard give way to flowers of hope, even knowing love cannot be imitated.
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKSep 3, 2010
beautiful CJ..as always your words go far..and near!
Ljj..
ForeverDestinySouth Amherst, Ohio USASep 3, 2010
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I walked, I heard, I felt, I cried and totally lost in her very being. Masterpiece, pure brilliance.
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Great write, CJ!
Beautiful poem.
What sorrow! We feel her pain as she Tiptoes between the graves of dead hopes. May the graveyard give way to flowers of hope, even knowing love cannot be imitated.
Ljj..