by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada
Oct 2010 776 Views 14 comments
~A last lost tear~
A millenium it seemed when it rolled down her cheek
Eyes lit like sun in fathoms of wet
She'd not asked for this
Yet her heart took her there
Vision obscure with mind full aware
Calendars in cradle each day marks an X
Expired as they lay on the counter in view
Was her heart brought her here
Flame burned so bright
Eleven in the pile workin on twelve
To the minute of day was his last gentle kiss
That last tear was found when her heart let it go~
Eyes lit like sun in fathoms of wet
She'd not asked for this
Yet her heart took her there
Vision obscure with mind full aware
Calendars in cradle each day marks an X
Expired as they lay on the counter in view
Was her heart brought her here
Flame burned so bright
Eleven in the pile workin on twelve
To the minute of day was his last gentle kiss
That last tear was found when her heart let it go~
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Posted: Oct 2010
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Comments (14)
vision obscure with mind full aware. WOW! I'm with Gashly on this! Nicely captured down to the last lost tear.
and the last line is awesome..
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"...last tear was found when..." Great insight, great writing
Intense. A little sad, but gripping. Very well done. I enjoyed.