your sweet behind alluring me up your stares i want you in the worst way, first today then again tonight, before the morrow oh moan your sweet morning moan in the hay
and take my hardened desires to heart pleasures of flesh so tactile to sense savour the salt, peppered and smoky my passion arises without pretense
though virile my favour of your physique i cannot, but admire with lustful desire your form, your build, your whole mystique you quite simply set my world on fire
baby you know and can surely relate nature's innate force a natural selection the drive is too strong to penetrate your tongue a living sweet confection
desires many of eloquent voice and pen i rhapsodize and sing in so many ways i want your loving again and again my lust, your love, to coin a phrase
Oh, a love expressed in a barn. The smell of freshly cut hay and a fire with it's woodsmoke scent.:sighs contentedly: This speaks to me so very well. Wonderful write!!
So Absolutely beautiful Dave, no section needs to be be brought forth, it is, within all your write, you have so surely centerd towards your inner love of your "own" soul
now truly you both shall begin to soar
I smile
Sophia xx
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKDec 1, 2010
Have you been eating too much cheese?
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKDec 1, 2010
Even if you were to leave the obvious to one side for a moment, in my opinion, this is a brilliantly written poem GG.....Thankyou for posting......Andrew...
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKDec 1, 2010
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passionate... but so sensitive...it's called LOVE
Niah
a lovely poem to be savoured over and over.
(awwww!)
Spicy cooking up?
no section needs to be be brought forth, it is, within all your write, you have so surely centerd towards your inner love of your "own" soul
now truly you both shall begin to soar
I smile
Sophia
xx