Catch your breath Open up and swallow air The waves of the future are fast approaching. Kicking against the current stretch arm over arm swim, else drown in the salt of tears, the bittersweet pill of survival clutched in our hands.
Laughter rings from within conference-room walls knowing the shoals of year’s end closing were safely navigated sails slightly tattered billowing in winter’s breeze. Yet, frigid winds blow outside our doors waiting to ice spring plans.
Made instruments of our own demise, then it will be the hemlock that comes to our lips.
Hi, ReaderOfSouls, Ladybee42 and agoodguy2have, Thank you for your kind words and support. Unlike the 400 let go Wednesday, I and my remaining co-workers are hanging in there; but, we remain wondering which of us will be among the 1,000 that will be let go in 2011. 'Success' always seems to come at a price to someone.
I too know what its like to loose a job, twice in one year (the second one yesterday). Your poem expresses that and more. Enjoyed it.
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 4, 2010
gnj4u...a topic that is without doubt a bittersweet pill...great insight, glad you survived this round.....Niah
pinkcoralNaha, Okinawa JapanDec 4, 2010
this is a nice writing we have so many poeple are layoff.....here. makes me think thire situation,feel.... thank you for sharing.
beautifulyouNew York, USADec 5, 2010
Such difficult economic times...
I'm so glad you still have your work. It must be so hard not knowing if or when things will change.
I'm sending you positive energy, and my prayers.
Blessed be, gnj ~
ironmanhamilton, Ontario CanadaDec 5, 2010
Waves of the future are fast approaching well written the harsh reality of life a sensitive topic handled in a delicate way thank you for the descriptive poetry
Hi, ironman, mike7375 and Swan87, Thank you for your kind comments and support. May we all survive the waves of the future, in work, life and love, with a little help from our friends!
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USADec 6, 2010
I'm sorry to hear of this. Even in hard times you write with such kindness. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for your kind words and support. Unlike the 400 let go Wednesday, I and my remaining co-workers are hanging in there; but, we remain wondering which of us will be among the 1,000 that will be let go in 2011. 'Success' always seems to come at a price to someone.
we have so many poeple are layoff.....here.
makes me think thire situation,feel....
thank you for sharing.
I'm so glad you still have your work.
It must be so hard not knowing if or when things will change.
I'm sending you positive energy, and my prayers.
Blessed be, gnj ~
well written the harsh reality of life
a sensitive topic handled in a delicate way
thank you for the descriptive poetry
Keep it goin sister !
With Love
Swan
Thank you for your kind comments and support. May we all survive the waves of the future, in work, life and love, with a little help from our friends!
Me, too. Thank you for your kind comments. It's good to hear from you!
Thank you for generously describing my poem as "eloquent". I think it's a first for one of my poems! I am pleased that you like it.
CJ
Thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comments. I am pleased that you like my write.