The Bittersweet Pill

Catch your breath
Open up and swallow air
The waves of the future
are fast approaching.
Kicking against the current
stretch arm over arm
swim, else drown
in the salt of tears,
the bittersweet pill of survival
clutched in our hands.

Laughter rings from within
conference-room walls
knowing the shoals
of year’s end closing
were safely navigated
sails slightly tattered
billowing in winter’s breeze.
Yet, frigid winds blow
outside our doors
waiting to ice spring plans.

Made instruments of our own demise,
then it will be the hemlock
that comes to our lips.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
layoffs at work survived, for now

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ReaderOfSouls
Hang in there, hon. hug Great write! wine heart wings
Ladybee42
things are not getting any better are they? so glad you survived this round gnj4u, and hope you survive any future moves. hug thumbs up bouquet bouquet
agoodguy2have
GNJ, as always you treat a bad situation with care and compassion. Gallows humor is always a bittersweet laugh. We're all still though. Thank you. ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, ReaderOfSouls, Ladybee42 and agoodguy2have,
Thank you for your kind words and support. Unlike the 400 let go Wednesday, I and my remaining co-workers are hanging in there; but, we remain wondering which of us will be among the 1,000 that will be let go in 2011. 'Success' always seems to come at a price to someone.
spnglish
I too know what its like to loose a job, twice in one year (the second one yesterday). Your poem expresses that and more. Enjoyed it.cheering
niah9online today!
gnj4u...a topic that is without doubt a bittersweet pill...great insight, glad you survived this round.....Niahcheering bouquet
pinkcoral
this is a nice writing
we have so many poeple are layoff.....here.
makes me think thire situation,feel....
thank you for sharing.
bouquet
beautifulyou
Such difficult economic times...

I'm so glad you still have your work.
It must be so hard not knowing if or when things will change.

I'm sending you positive energy, and my prayers.

Blessed be, gnj ~



teddybear
ironman
Waves of the future are fast approaching
well written the harsh reality of life
a sensitive topic handled in a delicate way
thank you for the descriptive poetrycheering
mike7375
Nice work Gnj4u. I know the feeling all too wellwave
Swan87
Sweet gnj4u .. What a Beautiful Write ! Reflecate the real you ..
Keep it goin sister ! teddybear

With Love
Swan
gnj4u
Hi, ironman, mike7375 and Swan87,
Thank you for your kind comments and support. May we all survive the waves of the future, in work, life and love, with a little help from our friends!
Pinkpoetress
I'm sorry to hear of this. Even in hard times you write with such kindness. Thank you for sharing.
gnj4u
Hi, Pinkpoetress,
Me, too. Thank you for your kind comments. It's good to hear from you!
jeddah12
eloquent discription,,,very nice gnj4,,thanks for sharingbouquet wine
gnj4u
Hi, jeddah12,
Thank you for generously describing my poem as "eloquent". I think it's a first for one of my poems! I am pleased that you like it.
Earlgreytea
Now this, is poetry...!!!thumbs up
dreamwolf5264
very nice write! of times that are really unstable.wave thumbs up
caroljoyce
Very well structured write, great imagery.
CJ
gnj4u
Hi, Earlgreytea, dreamwolf5264, and caroljoyce,
Thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comments. I am pleased that you like my write.
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