Miners Rising

Life line of air
food, hope
births jubilation
as first miner
rises 700 meters
slowly to the top and
greets life’s sudden reality
transformed.

For two days we watched
as you dangled
one-by-one, by a cord
not nine months in the waiting
but no less powerful
in its consequence.

69 days of a surreal existence
buried in the bowels of the earth
President Pinera at full attention
with billions hidden by his side
the drama as ancient as the mine
an ingenious time capsule
created to turn back the clock
to safety before the fall
entombed miners.

We are the keepers of our
sisters and brothers
unspoiled by Cain’s touch
in a world that now knows the way
to Chile’s San Jose mine
Rescuer Manuel Gonzalez
gets into the Fenix capsule
taking his life into his own hands
descends into darkness
to discover the light.

Bloodshot eyes, tangled hair
tear-streaked cheeks await
the early to late risings
the stone rolled away
as a nation and the world
are reborn to hope.

No “great escape” this
but rather a rescue
driven by a bit and
the beating of human hearts.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
Though written on the day of the rising, still not sure it is ready for the light.

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Fellsman
Hi GNJ

Great story telling, and an enjoyable read.....

Kindest regards

Fellsman rose
agoodguy2have
GNJ, a great story told indeed and in deed. you make us feel as if we were there...maybe not a great escape, but a great story / poem. ;-)
caroljoyce
Superb! Outstanding, in a clss of its own.
cj
jeddah12
a very clever and fantastic poem indeed gnj,,thanks for sharing mam,,i enjoy thiswine bouquet
paloma66
An excellent masterpiece of Verse.Thank you for sharing this.thumbs up applause bouquet
niah9
These priceless poems are important...anbd can always be returned to, and we are back at that time...time has stood still...great write...Niahpeace wow
beautifulyou
This is truly beautiful, beyond words gnj
I love the analogies, and the inherent truths you convey here.


"births jubilation... not nine months in the waiting
but no less powerful
in its consequence..."


That is a superb reflection on the outcome of human gestation!

"We are the keepers of our
sisters and brothers
unspoiled by Cain’s touch.... descends into darkness
to discover the light."


How true! When we are keepers, we may often have to descend into darkness, only to discover the light! This is truly poignant.

"the stone rolled away
as a nation and the world
are reborn to hope."


From my perspective, this is so of "The Christ Consciousness"
..a gentle yet powerful reminder of how each and every one of us can make a difference in this world, even if we are thought to be gone.

And your last stanza so brilliantly speaks to both our humanity and Divinity ~
What a gift you have given us...

Ty for this sharing!


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luvuluvme2
gnj4u, it truly was a miracle. thank you. angel hug reindeer
pilgrimageoflove
what a beautiful way of telling their story.
ReaderOfSouls
A miracle in the making. Wondrous! wine hug heart wings bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, Fellsman, agoodguy2have, marikia, caroljoyce, jeddah12, paloma66, niah9, beautifulyou, luvuluvme2, prilgrimageoflove, and ReaderOfSouls,
The tremendous emotion and hopefulness for humanity I felt while witnessing the rescue is what I wanted to communicate. beautifulyou, thank you for your special attention that "sees". Great things are possible, the faith of my childhood still believes! Thank y'all for the feelings and support your comments reflect.
jazzy75
gnj4u - well thought out poem...you really captured the emotion brilliantly. i just love all the different levels in here
cool
Macduff5
That was such a feel good story that got the attention of the world. You've captured the moment for posterity in an excellent poem. Well done! thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, jazzy75 and macduff5,
I am pleased that emotion was conveyed on the many levels I felt when writing it. The survival and rescue demonstrated that humans can be quite amazing beings. Thank you both for your generous comments.
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