between A and Z

friendship remains for D and C
with the balance of power shifted
new life into the mixture has come
with happiness to be gifted

though it was just at tips of fingers
there is no rest for R and R
yet the aroma of love still lingers
baked goodness dripping from a star

T partially consumed by S
J nearly done in by K
alphabet of love failures
on the heart doth heavily weigh

cell turned against itself
to destroy from inside out
love’s loss it was that turned the switch
research will prove, no doubt

overwhelmed by grief of loss
sleep tossed from night to day
time would turn quickly for one
the other later would have to pay

T swept up by love of M
who proved to be the one
J dangles without letter to come
match step-for-step life’s fun

blizzard flakes of besotted love
fall from heaven and blanket ground
obstructed view by clouds above
storms continuing to surround

waiting for love in stormy weather
swirling snowflakes strike the cheek
‘til love returns and makes life better
wait, a new year starts this week
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2010

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Comments (16)

niah9
Yes gnj4u....life told by letters...changes occur within life.. change never stops....a new year is almost upon us...a time when we hope for more future change.
I'm not sure if others view the poem as I do, but I enjoyed the journey....Niahteddybear bouquet
ReaderOfSouls
Love and life spoken in letters, just as a poet does. May the new year bring you much happiness, a new love and new experiences in which to partake. :)

Wonderfully woven!! thumbs up wine hug heart wings teddybear
marikia
Waiting for love in stormy weather, waiting 'til love returns and makes life better, waiting ... I hope next year we won't have to wait for too long. Very original way of presenting the alphabet of love failures, and I am looking forward to the next alphabet of love glories in the coming year as a reward for the permanent search for love. Enjoyed the poem, thank you.
trurorob
clever poem J with good flow!
rob
Earlgreytea
I immensely enjoyed this one, my friend, thanks for sharing!!!thumbs up
Gwynevier
Beautifully written!
Fellsman
Hi GNJ

Very original - and for someone who normally eschews rhyme, a really good write........

Best wishes

Fellsman rose
agoodguy2have
gnj,

these lines of lovely alphabet
that rhyme so well and true
a gambled chanced love you bet
we've all been there, deja vu

i'm keepin' my day job! ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, niah9, ReaderOfSouls, marikia, trurorob, Earlgreytea, Gwynevie, Fellsman, and agoodguy2have,
Thank you so much for your encouraging words about my poem. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. In ringing out the old and ringing in the new, thoughts come as thoughts often do. I don’t really eschew rhyme rather I, too, write from the heart, not mind. Sometimes, out rhyming it comes, at other times, not. I am pleased to be sharing poetic snowflakes with each of you! Here's to a glorious journey through 2011 and beyond! P.S. I'm keeping my day job (as long as I can, that is), too!
boyshchrm6
Excellent poem on many levels. The New Year
will bring positive changes and enlightenment
for many I predict.comfort angel thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
I'm sure everyone is hoping your prediction of "positive changes and enlightenment for many" will come to fruition. I know I do! And, so, the New Year begins! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It's good to have you back on Poet's Corner!
jazzy75
gnj4u - powerful and thought provoking write! May all be blessed with knowing love this year cheers
caroljoyce
Heart-rendingly beautiful. You write quite like Goodguy. I shall continue with a day job, also.
CJsigh sad flower
gnj4u
Hi, jazzy75 and caroljoyce,
Compliments on poetry from the two of you are treasures. Although not written about Poet-Corner relationships, I am honoured to be sharing the life space between A and Z with you. Yes, may we all be blessed with love!
andrew149
Hi sorry for being a little late, but better late than never in some cases...lol.....my surname begins with a "W", so all through my earlier life, at school and then the Army....I was always at the back of the queue, as in those days most things were done alphabetically....and for other things in life, now I am a little older?......LOL....STILL waiting.....Kindest regards...And...Happy New Year my friend.....Andrew...xxxcool
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
I'll take a poem comment from you in any order. Yes, I used to think that the teachers should mix it up and go in reverse order every once in a while. Hope you liked the poem anyway! The year I taught, I quietly took attendance and did everything else randomly. But, now, that you bring up the order thing, my poem does appear to have had a close brush with going in quasi-alphabetical order, except for that dangling J and that pesky K!
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