perspective

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

Jan 2011 434 Views 6 comments

perspective

a line or chaos vision,
whether you step back
or put your nose to it
they still look the same
zoom in or pan away

the line is still a line
the chaos is still erratic
but both are beautiful
serene in their own right
the vision before the eye

it's what is behind the eye
in the mind of the soul
tangled and nakedly true
the swirling thoughts are
mine alone for me to

curse or bless the vision
that is being in the now
turn of head to see in sight
be fearful or elated is
just another perspective

today i choose to write
lines of a chaotic fashion
about obscure tangential
turns and what my soul sees
today's perspective is good

© agoodguy2have 2011-01-02

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Posted: Jan 2011

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Comments (6)

ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas USAJan 2, 2011

Tangential, transcendal and all that is good. :)The way we perceive things is amazing in and of itself. I *LOVE* your writings!!

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJan 2, 2011

An interesting take on this one GG. We all see things from our own perspective and how we interpret them in the mind's eye, is whether we see them as good or bad, harmonious or chaotic. And sometimes even chaos is a good thing.

ng970brownsville, Texas USAJan 3, 2011

PERSPECTIVE IS GOOD,WHEN ITS YOUR OWN ITS PERFECT.WHEN IT IS SOMEONE ELSES HMMMMMM.OH WELL YOU HAVE TO TAKE IT FROM BOTH SIDES. YOUR PERSPECTIVE WITH THIS POEM WAS STRAIGHT ON,I ENJOYED IT.....
NG970

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaJan 4, 2011

Yes, your own vision behind the eye is what counts in the end, it is nobody's business, you either see it that way or it doesn't matter. What counts is what you see and think of it. It is that simple and not chaotic at all ... I guessed it from "...what my soul sees today's perspective is good". It's good, Agoodguy, very good ... whatever you write.