What a wonderouse write made me draw breath just wonderful
amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAMar 18, 2011
Thanks Redex! A dream poem that has been haunting me for a few weeks...
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 18, 2011
Well now you have passed that on to me but it is beautiful really patient and true love I think
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 18, 2011
Hi Amahlala
I wonder if you could consider changing the text from black to white or other light colour? I am not able to read it against that very dark red background.
Kindest regards
Bill
amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAMar 18, 2011
HI Bill, I will see what I can do....
0rpheusSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMar 18, 2011
I wish sometimes I could spend a day with every lonely soul, taking them golfing or just riding around talking about whatever is bothering them, helping them forget themselves, making them happy.
ah-hhh this is such a romantic beautiful writes with many wonderful words and mm... what can I say ... it touched me (my heart) !!!
I loved the following sentences the most::heartbeating:
Seeking again, I know I can't reach you... Tormenting me with a memory lost among the eons.
and, Until I've learned this lesson and my soul knows its name... I will be feeling the depths of your souls anguish for eternity.
Thank you!!!!! for writing such a beautiful poem!!!!! ( er... would you mind if I'd like to know why 'Ankara'?? why not "Bangkok" or "Washington D.C." or "London"? )
mmm.... this is Ankara II ??? where is Ankara I? mmm... I might have missed the part I, >_<// However, I'm looking forward to reading Ankara III!!!
Hi, amahlala, Until I've learned this lesson and my soul knows its name... The searching soul is an eager student. Perhaps some lessons require a different teaching approach. Thanks for sharing Ankara II.
amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAMar 19, 2011
Thanks for your comments!
Mcradlof~I am actually an annoyingly happy person ~ just have dreams/poems that float through my mind until they come out!
SunandSea~The name is based on another poem I wrote ~ seems to have also come from the same dream realm.
Gnj4u~I think my soul will forever search and learn!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 19, 2011
Dear Amahlala
This quite sublime, perfectly delightful... A bouquet to you for such beautiful writing...
Regards
Bill
amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAMar 19, 2011
Thank you Fellsman!
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMar 21, 2011
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I wonder if you could consider changing the text from black to white or other light colour? I am not able to read it against that very dark red background.
Kindest regards
Bill
very heart felt
I loved the following sentences the most::heartbeating:
Seeking again, I know I can't reach you...
Tormenting me with a memory lost among the eons.
and,
Until I've learned this lesson and my soul knows its name...
I will be feeling the depths of your souls anguish for eternity.
Thank you!!!!! for writing such a beautiful poem!!!!! ( er... would you mind if I'd like to know why 'Ankara'?? why not "Bangkok" or "Washington D.C." or "London"? )
mmm.... this is Ankara II ??? where is Ankara I? mmm... I might have missed the part I, >_<// However, I'm looking forward to reading Ankara III!!!
Until I've learned this lesson and my soul knows its name... The searching soul is an eager student. Perhaps some lessons require a different teaching approach. Thanks for sharing Ankara II.
Mcradlof~I am actually an annoyingly happy person ~ just have dreams/poems that float through my mind until they come out!
SunandSea~The name is based on another poem I wrote ~ seems to have also come from the same dream realm.
Gnj4u~I think my soul will forever search and learn!
This quite sublime, perfectly delightful... A bouquet to you for such beautiful writing...
Regards
Bill
you are brave.
loved it.