Feminine Power

by boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario, Canada

Apr 2011 754 Views 19 comments

Feminine Power

Denim jeans or ballroom gown
A womanly figure in any town
Hips that curve and waist so thin
As close to heaven as I've ever been
Golden hair flowing over smooth skin
Green eyes that draws all others in
Oh to cling to you and hold tight
Press you close all through the night
Whispered words of breathless love
Smiles and glances from each above
Never leave but if your must...linger
Entwine our hands, each and every finger
Lips full and so passionately filled
Your lust detains and controls free will

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Posted: Apr 2011

About this poem:

The role or rule of woman?

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Comments (19)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainApr 9, 2011

Maybe Larry, but they want control of everything, nice
rob

niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 9, 2011

WOW

I'm smiling.....Oh yeah

I'll say no more...Niah

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 9, 2011

Great stuff my friend. But like the wise man said, 'Beauty is vain and charm is deceitful, but a good woman..wow!'

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 9, 2011

As long as they don't lock up the beer
it's all good Rob. Are you saying that
if you give them an inch they will take
a mile Rob???...lol.

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 9, 2011

a wonderful poem sir,,,press you close all night thru and whisper words of love....romantic indeed

keep it coming sir..

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 10, 2011

I take it you liked this one Niah?
Woman have their subtle ways of
getting what they want I think.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKApr 10, 2011

LOL....I once saw a woman wearing a T shirt that said on it..."He said I couldn't have this T shirt, so I threw a tantrum, now I am wearing it", I will always remember that....Good poem larry, well written too.....Andrew...

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 10, 2011

Thanks Cafetwo. A good beautiful and spiritual woman
is the ultimate then.....Wow..ie...lol.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 11, 2011

Thanks so much Jeddah. Really appreciate
your comments and your poetry also.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 15, 2011

Thanks Andrew. That that is what is meant by "the power of love"

lol

daciana1london, Greater London, England UKApr 15, 2011

About this poem:
The role or rule of woman?

Sometimes an wonder tells more that all the poem, but in your case, both did! Congrats!

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAApr 16, 2011

Ach! sure it has to be rule really! But that's only part of it isn't it?

cool observation

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 16, 2011

Yes Gnj4u Free will could be detained without great damage...couldn't it?...well Maybe???

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 18, 2011

Thanks so much for your comment Daciana.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 21, 2011

thanks for your comments SandS. Yes I wear dark glasses
because I am afraid Feminine Power will Blind me
otherwise...lol.

beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 21, 2011

So often the "rule for women" seems to be the role we're expected to assume.

And if we don't play the role, or fit into that hollow box, well

Unfortunately, men are often also boxed.

I guess the only way for both genders to break societal patterns of expectations is to break the rules by being our authentic selves, and by seeing and treating others within the realm of their authenticity.

Thanks for the question boyshchrm.