Y R

Y R those Dervishes always seen whirling
Y R most thoughts oft so provoking
Y R Waikiki waves always curling
Y R guns so often left smoking

Y R hydrants all turned in to fire
Y R offenses intended by the criminal
Y R those barbs unbendingly barbed wire
Y R hidden messages thought so subliminal

Y R we seized with days Carpe diem
Y R lights northern borealis of aurora
Y R we then French-kissed to je t'aime
Y R lives on Earth this fauna and flora

Y R days visions a beautiful aesthetic
Y R souls rhapsodies a license poetic

© agoodguy2have 2011-04-20
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
Questions of letters to betters...

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Comments (10)

Macduff5
GG...do I sense a sonnet here? Very clever as usual. thumbs up wine
caroljoyce
Y R will havta wait for a meaningful comment from me, I am having a brain part delivered.confused
NeverEndingStory
wave confused Confused me so have to go with what others comment. Just not that intelligent I suppose teddybear
cafetwo2010
YR+YR=RY! 'Eternity is put in the heart.' A real genius you are my friend. I have to start writing this stuff down.lol. I've had five cups of coffee tonight..and you? lolthumbs up
niah9
my brain is whirling...goodguy2have....so I just focused on the connections...and come up with Y. R....very very special....rolling on the floor laughing
Niahyay bunny daisy
Pinkpoetress
GG,
I like your style. Don't always get it, but that's because you are one ahead of me. Nice work.
superman30
we are..ok(me thinks:)Thank you Mr Dave.
pilgrimageoflove
R should follow Y in the alphabet
I reckon. thumbs up
Fellsman
Hi Good Guy

I'm glad this sonnet re-surfaced, I missed it altogether first time round. A great write...

Best wishes

Bill cheers
QuietStormF
yr a very clever and talented poet.. So glad that we are blessed to have you among us here on the poetry corner..hug bouquet teddybear
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