Y R those Dervishes always seen whirling Y R most thoughts oft so provoking Y R Waikiki waves always curling Y R guns so often left smoking
Y R hydrants all turned in to fire Y R offenses intended by the criminal Y R those barbs unbendingly barbed wire Y R hidden messages thought so subliminal
Y R we seized with days Carpe diem Y R lights northern borealis of aurora Y R we then French-kissed to je t'aime Y R lives on Earth this fauna and flora
Y R days visions a beautiful aesthetic Y R souls rhapsodies a license poetic
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 22, 2011
GG...do I sense a sonnet here? Very clever as usual.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 22, 2011
Y R will havta wait for a meaningful comment from me, I am having a brain part delivered.
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 22, 2011
Confused me so have to go with what others comment. Just not that intelligent I suppose
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 23, 2011
YR+YR=RY! 'Eternity is put in the heart.' A real genius you are my friend. I have to start writing this stuff down.lol. I've had five cups of coffee tonight..and you? lol
niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 23, 2011
my brain is whirling...goodguy2have....so I just focused on the connections...and come up with Y. R....very very special.... Niah
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 23, 2011
GG, I like your style. Don't always get it, but that's because you are one ahead of me. Nice work.
superman30Limassol, CyprusApr 23, 2011
we are..ok(me thinks:)Thank you Mr Dave.
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 25, 2011
R should follow Y in the alphabet I reckon.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKApr 25, 2011
Hi Good Guy
I'm glad this sonnet re-surfaced, I missed it altogether first time round. A great write...
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Niah
I like your style. Don't always get it, but that's because you are one ahead of me. Nice work.
I reckon.
I'm glad this sonnet re-surfaced, I missed it altogether first time round. A great write...
Best wishes
Bill