the unfinished

bare wood, plain steel, fresh-fired clay
what is left lying around and about
the ream of handwritten novel notes
dangling conversations, what can I say
lives transcending their meaning without
the human errors, mistakes, misquotes

that were wanted to straighten and correct
the second chances, opportunities missed
if we could do all that we had desired
but left in hindsight are only circumspect
the bucket things we've left off the list
forget all the junk that had transpired

would we then go gently into that night
the importance of all the parts unfinished
at the final analysis just doesn't matter
maybe exiting the stage without stage fright
without final polish somehow undiminished
those things unsaid, some unfinished chatter

things mattered more back then in the middle
now freed of life to freely speak mind
simply felt simply known and simply said
things before, more of a Gordian riddle
so the rope is cut, such a tenuous line
things left unfinished to simply go ahead

© agoodguy2have 2011-06-01
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
for a friend

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DaBomb72
"would we then go gently into that night
the importance of all the parts unfinished
at the final analysis just doesn't matter"

Goodguy, excellent writing. I have a Gordian riddle myself as a subject of my inner debates. I'm still unable. Paralyzed...kinda. I would take your poem as a second bible...for that what i read seems not enough. Thank you for sharing this !handshake wine
simpleME32
''Don't mess with Zohan'' is finished because SnoopDog changef his style.The music is like a rich dream for poor people or a rich excuse for clever dudes.Digital undergroud'' must keep her CrazyHouse becsuse VincentVanGogh lost his hopes to find a right colour for humanity.His brother Thomas cryed but couldn't brig him back.Chris Rea wrote Road to hell after he visited street of Philadelfia of Springsteen
Down in the right page of any book or in every right side of a BlackBird is written'report ''the solution or eject''.
You know what i'm talkin 'don't ya''.Thank you again and
"Don't worry ,be happy'' i learnt to swim long time ago whitout any bridge arround.None hold me and none tooked me from the street to give me a bread.With this i rest my case..and thank you for sharing your house.Your chairs are not comfortable.MrDave.
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Life, by its nature, is unfinished...to the very end...we simply go ahead. A very poignant write, my friend.
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