bare wood, plain steel, fresh-fired clay what is left lying around and about the ream of handwritten novel notes dangling conversations, what can I say lives transcending their meaning without the human errors, mistakes, misquotes
that were wanted to straighten and correct the second chances, opportunities missed if we could do all that we had desired but left in hindsight are only circumspect the bucket things we've left off the list forget all the junk that had transpired
would we then go gently into that night the importance of all the parts unfinished at the final analysis just doesn't matter maybe exiting the stage without stage fright without final polish somehow undiminished those things unsaid, some unfinished chatter
things mattered more back then in the middle now freed of life to freely speak mind simply felt simply known and simply said things before, more of a Gordian riddle so the rope is cut, such a tenuous line things left unfinished to simply go ahead
"would we then go gently into that night the importance of all the parts unfinished at the final analysis just doesn't matter"
Goodguy, excellent writing. I have a Gordian riddle myself as a subject of my inner debates. I'm still unable. Paralyzed...kinda. I would take your poem as a second bible...for that what i read seems not enough. Thank you for sharing this !
simpleME32Limassol, CyprusJun 2, 2011
''Don't mess with Zohan'' is finished because SnoopDog changef his style.The music is like a rich dream for poor people or a rich excuse for clever dudes.Digital undergroud'' must keep her CrazyHouse becsuse VincentVanGogh lost his hopes to find a right colour for humanity.His brother Thomas cryed but couldn't brig him back.Chris Rea wrote Road to hell after he visited street of Philadelfia of Springsteen Down in the right page of any book or in every right side of a BlackBird is written'report ''the solution or eject''. You know what i'm talkin 'don't ya''.Thank you again and "Don't worry ,be happy'' i learnt to swim long time ago whitout any bridge arround.None hold me and none tooked me from the street to give me a bread.With this i rest my case..and thank you for sharing your house.Your chairs are not comfortable.MrDave.
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the importance of all the parts unfinished
at the final analysis just doesn't matter"
Goodguy, excellent writing. I have a Gordian riddle myself as a subject of my inner debates. I'm still unable. Paralyzed...kinda. I would take your poem as a second bible...for that what i read seems not enough. Thank you for sharing this !
Down in the right page of any book or in every right side of a BlackBird is written'report ''the solution or eject''.
You know what i'm talkin 'don't ya''.Thank you again and
"Don't worry ,be happy'' i learnt to swim long time ago whitout any bridge arround.None hold me and none tooked me from the street to give me a bread.With this i rest my case..and thank you for sharing your house.Your chairs are not comfortable.MrDave.
Life, by its nature, is unfinished...to the very end...we simply go ahead. A very poignant write, my friend.