by steve1223adelaide, South Australia

Aug 2011 482 Views 8 comments

????????

As I was a baby
I became a child
Who became a man
Who went to Heaven

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

One has to ask the question...is there a deeper meaning behind these words and if there is...what is it? There is an answer.

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Comments (8)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 4, 2011

never good with proverbial sayings,so i'm at a loss

so i'm banging my head against a wall

to see if i get the answer

kickit22auburn, Washington USAAug 4, 2011

in order too go too heaven you have too be rightous in your life. therefore you had to live a clean consious free life that is of peace and love. those two virtues now days are a rare commodity.

kickit.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 4, 2011

Ah now steve heaven can be many places

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandAug 4, 2011

He became a man who went to heaven. Did he go to heaven coz he was in love??? It's also another way to look at it coz love could mean heaven...anyway.

netmanMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 7, 2011

If I get it right do I get a prize?

steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 7, 2011

No problems. Should you get it right there is a all expense paid trip for two to the Danilova Resort for two weeks. The resort is situated on Danilova Crater which is 48km in diameter and has all the latest and greatest. There is an easy commute to the main Venusian city. Good luck