by boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario, Canada
Aug 2011 614 Views 22 comments
Elo Challenge
Seeking a kindred spirit
To complete my mind and soul
My compressed thoughts now embody
Bubbling brook with whirlpools
Containing white capsules of my spirit
May I embrace God's beauty
From brook,stream, river and ocean core
and let us drift off to celestial shores
To complete my mind and soul
My compressed thoughts now embody
Bubbling brook with whirlpools
Containing white capsules of my spirit
May I embrace God's beauty
From brook,stream, river and ocean core
and let us drift off to celestial shores
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Posted: Aug 2011
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Comments (22)
from brook ,stream,river and ocean core
and let us drift off to celestial shores;;
powerful impact of words,,great write...
Meet you at the shoreline??
To complete my mind and soul
My compressed thoughts now embody
Bubbling brook with whirlpools
Containing white capsules of my spirit
May I embrace God's beauty
From brook,stream, river and ocean core
and let us drift off to celestial shores
This is quite beautiful.
liked it.
HappygoL. Much appreciated.
To complete my mind and soul..."
Said so truly and concisely, just the way we feel when empty and wishing to attain completeness. Sometimes it is so difficult to explain our longings that we turn to nature, "bubbling brook with whirlpools," or other poets for help:
"I can’t explain what’s going on
And wish there wasn’t a need to
But there is always this emptiness,
A small but significant disparity of
Solitude and longing fueling the fires of
My reaching out and seeking kindred spirits..."
("Kindred Spirits" posted by Richard...)
Thank you very much for sharing!