Your words are overwhelming me Turn down their furious flow I'm not responsible for your happiness That's entirely your own show Your life is transforming you Experience your own sorrow Trying to make sense of life Is something you can't borrow My honesty may have shortcomings The truth might lie in a shadow It's not fair to share your feelings In the muddy pit where you wallow When feeling really down inside Is someplace not to follow If I could I'd cheer you up And give you a beautiful rainbow Just let you know you'll be ok and Bring you flowers from my meadow
This area is a hard subject to write about... we often admire those who quietly endure hard times and keep a smile, but it's nice too to know that others care.....
I love the title and the poem.. you have an amazing way with words! Sometimes we all need an unbrella..
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 14, 2011
Your words are overwhelming me Turn down their furious flow I'm not responsible for your happiness That's entirely your own show Your life is transforming you Experience your own sorrow Trying to make sense of life Is something you can't borrow My honesty may have shortcomings The truth might lie in a shadow It's not fair to share your feelings In the muddy pit where you wallow When feeling really down inside Is someplace not to follow If I could I'd cheer you up And give you a beautiful rainbow Just let you know you'll be ok and Bring you flowers from my meadow
Comments (4)
If I could I'd cheer you up
And give you a beautiful rainbow
Just let you know you'll be ok and
Bring you flowers from my meadow
Turn down their furious flow
I'm not responsible for your happiness
That's entirely your own show
Your life is transforming you
Experience your own sorrow
Trying to make sense of life
Is something you can't borrow
My honesty may have shortcomings
The truth might lie in a shadow
It's not fair to share your feelings
In the muddy pit where you wallow
When feeling really down inside
Is someplace not to follow
If I could I'd cheer you up
And give you a beautiful rainbow
Just let you know you'll be ok and
Bring you flowers from my meadow
Bravo.