AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 23, 2011
Nice writing Boysch. I always say there's time for everyting, and it's ok as far as we learn and keep going. Creating each self is a life time matter, isn't?
Creating oneself is a lifetime matter. The thing is as a youngster I had such expectations of making a difference and now find looking after myself and family a lofty goal...lol.
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 24, 2011
I am future past I am a flash in the pan I am a love that could never last I am the memory of a man
And that makes you who you are...just like everyone else...just a man...trying to lead life the best they can...nice write
Thanks Steve. Your comments help give me relevance!
niah9Auckland, New ZealandSep 24, 2011
Can I say...you are very kind and caring person....Kathy
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 24, 2011
Hi Boysh,
You are not the only one. I share you sentiment.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 24, 2011
Wonderful write my friend..I suppose if man is left to himself to evaluate his own self worth he could make himself a god (which many have), or he could feel himself to be less than nothing(which many have).To have faith in God is to see ourselves as he see us (of infinite worth).We sometimes are painfully aware of our physical smallness compared to infinite creation, but that is actually a good thing. What would creation be if no one knew it existed? WE Know!God said, 'Man was his crowning work of creation.' Man possesses attributes of mind, spirit,a unique consciousness not shared by any other life form.We are worth more than we can ever imagine..
Hi, boyshchrm6, While asking Who am I, the poet is writing an I am of a very nice, albeit melancholy, poem. Thanks for sharing with us these words on the wind.
Thanks for your wonderful comments CafeTwo. Gives me hope that I am more than H2O and bones.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 24, 2011
Hi Boys, i am words on the wind,lovely. Fantastic write,a great lesson...staying true to oneself and ones imperfection that is so well manifested on a daily basis,thanks ...PN1
Boysh, You are a great inspitation to many...everything isn't as it seems when you look at the whole, but only when you look at the individual things that make up the whole....
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The thing is as a youngster I had such
expectations of making a difference and
now find looking after myself and family
a lofty goal...lol.
I am a flash in the pan
I am a love that could never last
I am the memory of a man
And that makes you who you are...just like everyone else...just a man...trying to lead life the best they can...nice write
help give me relevance!
You are not the only one. I share you sentiment.
I am a skeleton
Wearing sunglasses
I am a thin melon
Lost in the masses
While asking Who am I, the poet is writing an I am of a very nice, albeit melancholy, poem. Thanks for sharing with us these words on the wind.
I will not write that fifth stanza.
of sand on an endless beach...oh, another
possible verse...lol.
Gives me hope that I am more than H2O and
bones.
i am words on the wind,lovely. Fantastic write,a great lesson...staying true to oneself and ones imperfection that is so well manifested on a daily basis,thanks ...PN1
our imperfections and thought that
we are but a grain of sand in the
scope of things.
many things need changing in this world and one
feels so powerless to do anything.