Who am I

I am glass falling
I am a fish in a dry river bed
I am a candle that is burning
I am the walking dead

I am a revision
I am a fake duplicate
I am only a temporary vision
I am a dream to reciprocate

I am but a breathe
I am words on the wind
I am molecules of this earth
I am one who has sinned

I am future past
I am a flash in the pan
I am a love that could never last
I am the memory of a man
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
I sometimes feel very insignificant
in this large, complicated, out of
control world.

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Ayhra
Nice writing Boysch. I always say there's time for everyting, and it's ok as far as we learn and keep going. Creating each self is a life time matter, isn't? handshake bouquet applause
boyshchrm6
Creating oneself is a lifetime matter.
The thing is as a youngster I had such
expectations of making a difference and
now find looking after myself and family
a lofty goal...lol. angel cool hug grin
steve1223
I am future past
I am a flash in the pan
I am a love that could never last
I am the memory of a man


And that makes you who you are...just like everyone else...just a man...trying to lead life the best they can...nice write

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fjamesj9701
Cool write my friend, this is keeper from the great poet Boyshchrm I Ambeer handshake
boyshchrm6
Thanks Steve. Your comments
help give me relevance!cool angel
grin peace cheers cheers
niah9
Can I say...you are very kind and caring person....Kathyteddybear wink
Macduff5
Hi Boysh,

You are not the only one. I share you sentiment. handshake cheers
cafetwo2010
Wonderful write my friend..I suppose if man is left to himself to evaluate his own self worth he could make himself a god (which many have), or he could feel himself to be less than nothing(which many have).To have faith in God is to see ourselves as he see us (of infinite worth).We sometimes are painfully aware of our physical smallness compared to infinite creation, but that is actually a good thing. What would creation be if no one knew it existed? WE Know!God said, 'Man was his crowning work of creation.' Man possesses attributes of mind, spirit,a unique consciousness not shared by any other life form.We are worth more than we can ever imagine..thumbs up wine
boyshchrm6
Thanks Fjames.You are too kind.
I am a skeleton
Wearing sunglasses
I am a thin melon
Lost in the massesangel cool dancing cheers
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
While asking Who am I, the poet is writing an I am of a very nice, albeit melancholy, poem. Thanks for sharing with us these words on the wind.
boyshchrm6
Well thanks Niah...but out of modesty
I will not write that fifth stanza.
laugh angel hug cool
boyshchrm6
Thanks MacDuff. I sometimes feel like a piece
of sand on an endless beach...oh, another
possible verse...lol.handshake cool angel help cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your wonderful comments CafeTwo.
Gives me hope that I am more than H2O and
bones.thumbs up angel cool cheers
Poetnumber1
Hi Boys,
i am words on the wind,lovely. Fantastic write,a great lesson...staying true to oneself and ones imperfection that is so well manifested on a daily basis,thankshandshake cheers ...PN1
Yankee4you
Boysh, You are a great inspitation to many...everything isn't as it seems when you look at the whole, but only when you look at the individual things that make up the whole....
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your astute comments GnJ.angel cool grin hug
boyshchrm6
Thanks PN1. Yes we must live with
our imperfections and thought that
we are but a grain of sand in the
scope of things.angel cool grin cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks Yankee4 for your comment.It is just that so
many things need changing in this world and one
feels so powerless to do anything.angel thumbs up cool grin peace
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