When I see you I see poetry walking A sweet poem with legs When I hear you talking I'm walking on eggs When you move your body It's rock and roll...leaves me rocking I see the words you embody You are poetry walking Poetry that graces my presence Poetry that makes the world joyous Poetry without pretense Moving words that we could discuss Poetry undefined Poetry as yet unnamed Poetry that makes me smile Every emotion I have ever had Whenever you walk a mile Seeps from each step that you tread You are inspiration, sensation, elation And every nuance of sensuality I could only dream of You are the real deal lady.... with passion An angel in blue with a halo of gold from above A million poems all rolled into one None do you justice but I've just begun You reveal poetry when you smile You are the stars, you are the sun You're poetry walking Poetry unrestrained Poetry untamed Poetry in a blue dress Baby....you're poetry...start walking! I do love poetry...I confess!
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Inspired by that old song Poetry in Motion that I heard few days ago...and a beautiful lady in a blue dress. Chemistry is sometimes due to body language which inspires emotion and thoughts of love and then some poetic phrases...... or it all might just be lust....lol.Not sure!!!
Thanks EarlGreyT. You are too kind. I think I just flipped when I saw this beautiful woman the other day. Strange how certain traits catch one's attention. I have always loved that "Poetry in Motion" song.
"Poetry in motion See her gentle sway A wave out on the ocean Could never move that way"
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 26, 2011
Hi Boysh,
I loved the poem. Poetry is such a lovely metaphor for an inspirational experience in real life.
Thanks Bill. just a woman in the crowd but she sure got my attention. Ty
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 27, 2011
Ok, This is just to much power and appeal for a woman to have over a man..A meeting must be called. All men must attend the International Blue Dress Conference.'
I think this is just wonderful boyshchrm, I just love when someone comes up with a unique way to write a poem about love. Most love poems are just a bunch of cliches as they are so numerous how can anyone help saying what's been said before, but this is great. It's great because these are the kind of words that a woman wants to hear, 'You are the real deal lady'. No matter where you got the idea from it rocks.
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandOct 1, 2011
This is lovely poetical, simply beautiful boycharm!!
Thanks Thelma. Glad you found it enjoyable. I do like a good poetic walk....lol.
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaOct 22, 2011
WOW!!!Just wonderful.We have a Mc Cleans toothpaste add over here and its a beautiful woman sashaying down the street.Smiling. And as she goes the guys everywhere just drop off and join the line and follow. Stunning Title. Stunning Poetry::cheering:
Comments (19)
amazing and unusual way to write a love poem, thanks for sharing your considerable talent with us...
Best wishes
Bill
I think I just flipped when I saw
this beautiful woman the other day.
Strange how certain traits catch
one's attention. I have always loved
that "Poetry in Motion" song.
"Poetry in motion
See her gentle sway
A wave out on the ocean
Could never move that way"
I loved the poem. Poetry is such a lovely metaphor for an inspirational experience in real life.
but she sure got my attention. Ty
our lovely ladies MacDuff.
What more can I say.
with a good rhythm to it. Thanks
for your comment.
different isn't it, but kinda
exspresses how thrilled I am
when I have wonderfull feelings
for a lady.TY
it enjoyable. I do like a good
poetic walk....lol.
Stunning Title. Stunning Poetry::cheering: