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White Star in Your Kiss

Softly falls a gentle snow
My love for you swirls
Lifting us in a breeze
Touching up against starlight
Making us feel alright
Reaching my tongue for you
My eyes are closed I trust
Your kiss is soft and wet
To dwell a moment just
Dissolving into my mouth
I’ll take another and another
And warm your cold chill
In my precious thoughts
Let me be where you fall
There are so many now
Falling like white stars
From the black heavens
Trusting you to find me
Just knowing who you are
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Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
Whoever said snowfall isn't lovely is missing out..... :))

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Maxeen_1
White Star in Your Kiss
by: Yankee4you

Reaching my tongue for you
My eyes are closed I trust
Your kiss is soft and wet
To dwell a moment just
Dissolving into my mouth
I’ll take another and another
And warm your cold chill
In my precious thoughts
Let me be where you fall

Wow!!"ya got some "Erotic snow flakes" ya
catching and melting there :) yankee
A excellent write luved itgift angel wine
Redex
My mouth stays open now WHEN we get some snow flakesgrin
thelmatalla
Beautiful tenderly erotic piece Yankee. Enjoyed this warm poem with the backdrop of falling snow. .heart beating teddybear bouquet
Odette67
Softly falls a gentle snow
My love for you swirls
Lifting us in a breeze
Touching up against starlight
Making us feel alright
Reaching my tongue for you
My eyes are closed I trust
Your kiss is soft and wet

Beautiful! softly erotic poem yankee...There is something very sensual about catching snowdrops. heart beating
gnj4u
Hi, Yankee4you,
Let me be where you fall... Your delicious poem almost made me wish it would snow here in Boston - almost.
Odette67
OOOPS...silly me...I mean snowflakes not snowdrops heheherolling on the floor laughing
peaceful1
Gentle... sensual could have a dual meaning I truly enjoyed it ...
Thank you for this lovely thought lips
Yankee4you
There is something very sensual and calming and comforting soft and and quiet when a light snow is falling...it absorbs almost all sound and looks so peaceful and makes everything look so clean....
Poetnumber1
wow yay yay yay yay yay This is my kinda of thing my friend...Brilliantchoir choir choir choir choir choir choir choir choir choir choir angel2
niah9online today!
Well Yankee4you...I admit I hate the cold that snow brings, followed by sludge and ice, especially when I had to walk home for miles through it...but nothing can make me hate the world draped in crystal white, but your poem reminded me of words told me recently, about stars and messages...great write....Kathygrin teddybear
Calliopesgirl
I love snow, maybe because I am half Aleut!!
Yankee4you
Sometimes when an ice forms on everything after a freezing rain....it's like stepping in a crystal catherdral of nature....awesome and beautiful but also bleak and dangerous all at once....
Fellsman
Hi Yankee


How exquisitely you imbue the sensation of a snowflake on the tongue with a most discreet understated eroticism... A clever write.

Bill wine wine
sweetlycooling
innocent Speechlessblushing Beautiful
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