Dear Steve this is sad but a lovely poem.I love reading all your poems,though I do not comment on some.God bless you.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJan 28, 2012
Steve this was a lovely poem, I can relate so intake of breath when I read. It sounds just my thoughts in verse.
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 28, 2012
Thank you paloma66. It is so nice to hear that you enjoy my work. I must admit when I wrote this I placed myself in that position and actually felt the pulling in both directions. It is a sad poem and what makes it sadder is that the person has no control over their actions.
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 28, 2012
Thank you Redex...sometimes things just strike a chord
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 22, 2012
Well well well
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaFeb 23, 2012
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