Trapped

by Mizzy4Navan, Meath, Ireland

Jan 2014 534 Views 14 comments

Trapped !

Into the bottomless pool of plight
She cast her bait of tangled lies,
To spread the blame on ripples of pain
Ever increasing in size,
Against the thin transparent line of truth
Her strain it proved no match,
A surface splash reveals a twisting tale
This poacher now ..... The Catch.

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Posted: Jan 2014

About this poem:

The truth pays.

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Comments (14)

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 20, 2014

hi Mizzy,
this write is both sad and powerful
thanks for sharing it

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandJan 20, 2014

Hi Beautiful, Really appreciate your feedback.
Kind regards.....Mick.

sundayrose1san francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014

Very deep Mike. Beyond stunning...How are you?

Take care.

Phyllis

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJan 20, 2014

Hi Mick

I feel somewhat confused

very interesting poem and a fascinating ending as well

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandJan 20, 2014

Hi Phyllis my friend , thanks for the feedback and the concern.
Was often in a better place but I'll survive.
Take care also.......Mick.

Mizzy4OPNavan, Meath IrelandJan 20, 2014

Hi Martina, always nice to receive your comment. Basically
some lies were told about me and they backfired
leaving the person red faced. Hope this helps.
Regards Mick. Xx