zealousbeaverhalifax, West Yorkshire, England UKFeb 7, 2012
A poem with a difference, liked it .
RunawayDreamsPalm Bay, Florida USAFeb 7, 2012
Very sweet write! :-D
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKFeb 7, 2012
Tell Me, Am I Out of Line Tell me, am I out of line If I whisper words of love Hold you close, make you mine Whilst the angels sing above Tell me, am I out of line When done are our days Together we sip eterity's wine As we travel Heaven's highways Very gentle loving relaxing write steve ...how could you ever be out of line ..with such tender words lovely poem thank-you for sharing :
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Tell me, am I out of line
If I whisper words of love
Hold you close, make you mine
Whilst the angels sing above
Tell me, am I out of line
When done are our days
Together we sip eterity's wine
As we travel Heaven's highways
Very gentle loving relaxing write steve ...how could you ever be out of line ..with such tender words lovely poem thank-you for sharing :
When done are our days
Together we sip eterity's wine
As we travel Heaven's highways
Beautiful romantic poem Steve
What a great love poem. I truly enjoyed it, so romantic. Thanks.
Thanks for sharing this romantic poem
Nowadays there is a line "to please and forget"