Tell Me, Am I Out of Line

Tell me, am I out of line
If I went to hold your hand
with you I want to spend my time
On the beach, our toes in the sand

Tell me, am I out of line
If I whisper words of love
Hold you close, make you mine
Whilst the angels sing above

Tell me, am I out of line
If I want to make you my wife
I imagine a life so fine
Hand in hand we face future strife

Tell me, am I out of line
When done are our days
Together we sip eternity's wine
As we travel Heaven's highways
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Posted: Feb 2012

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Comments (18)

zealousbeaver
A poem with a difference, liked it .wine
RunawayDreams
teddybear Very sweet write! :-D
Maxeen_1
Tell Me, Am I Out of Line
Tell me, am I out of line
If I whisper words of love
Hold you close, make you mine
Whilst the angels sing above

Tell me, am I out of line
When done are our days
Together we sip eterity's wine
As we travel Heaven's highways

Very gentle loving relaxing write steve ...how could you ever be out of line ..with such tender words lovely poem thank-you for sharing :hug angel teddybear
Dazab
Get in line my boy ...lol Good poem mate. We write very similardancing
Odette67
Tell me, am I out of line
When done are our days
Together we sip eterity's wine
As we travel Heaven's highways

Beautiful romantic poem Steve purple heart
Pinkpoetress
Steve,

What a great love poem. I truly enjoyed it, so romantic. Thanks.
emmemm69
comfort
steve1223
Thank you zealousbeaver for your comment. I always try to write different ways. Glad you enjoyed it.

cheers
steve1223
Thanks RunawayDreams for dropping by

cheers
steve1223
Thank you Maxeen_1 for your kind words


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steve1223
Hi Dazab thanks for your comment....read your stuff and you write good

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steve1223
Thank you Odette67...always appreciate your comments

cheers
marlene33
hi!steve1223wave

Thanks for sharing this romantic poemhandshake thumbs up
steve1223
Thank you Pinkpoetress for your kind comment

teddybear
steve1223
Thanks emmemm69 cheers
steve1223
Thanks marlene33 cheers
solong
Yes you are! rolling on the floor laughing It's not in the line nowadays

Nowadays there is a line "to please and forget"
steve1223
Thanks solong for dropping by

cheers
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