What Matters

What really matters in this world you ask
Look at the pond where the sunsets shimmer
Sitting on the shore where to lay and bask
Watching all the gorgious color glimmer

Hike up past the forest filled with softwood
Where puffy white clouds drift just overhead
To almost reach up and touch where I stood
Way above where my quiet valley spread

The wind and sun and stars know who you are
As time will stand aside and let you pass
Await the end of night for morning star
Marvel at the beauty of old sea glass

Subtle greatness of life lies everywhere
By walking away from vanity fair
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
Descriptive little sonnet about just little beautiful things that fill our day with color and place and sense of time and purpose and bring comfort and peace and just exist.

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Odette67
What really matters in this world you ask
Look at the pond where the sunsets shimmer
Sitting on the shore where to lay and bask
Watching all the gorgious color glimmer

Another truly beautiful Sonnet Yankee...What realy does matter in the great scheme of things? purple heart
Fellsman
Hi Yankee4you

This is such a well crafted sonnet, on a technical level it works very well - the subject is the sheer essence of poetry.

Bill wine
pilgrimageoflove
Yankee
This is a beautiful and insightful write.
" Subtle greatness of life lies everywhere By by walking away from vanity fair"
Love it. As simple as that. Bravo.
swade777
Another master of the Sonnet in the making!

Fellsman... you've got a pretty good challenge on your hands with talent like this!!!

Time for a sonnet competition me thinks! (that we as appreciative readers might cast our votes!!)
applause

Let the competitive writing begin!!

How about I start it off by suggesting a 'topic' upon which the Sonnet is written??

"Hummingbirds"
windyweatherly
those that matter the most to me are the "subtle greatness of life" and we can definitely feel more their essence by "walking away from vanity fair." Thanks yankee4you for sharing this beautiful account of simple greatness of life.
Macduff5
Hi Yankee,

A lovely sonnet and a beautiful subject. Sometimes even poetry can't express these moments. wine
Gracefullone
A wonderful sonnet Yankee4you with great passion & insight.cheering
cherryreggae
Theres so much natural beauty..sometimes we forget!! Thanks for reminding us!! Lovely writeapplause
adjhe
Hi yankee thanks for sharing this sonnet it is a home run. lips
Ladybee42
very nice thumbs up
Maxeen_1
What Matters by: Yankee4you
just little beautiful things that fill our day with color and place and sense of time and purpose and bring comfort and peace and just exist.
Subtle greatness of life lies everywhere
By walking away from vanity fair
Beautiful sonnetYankee
luv it!!Poet friend thumbs up gift teddybear
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