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Excessive Love (Macduff's' Schmaltzy Challenge)

Excessive is my love of thee
Leading me away from sorrow
Whenever I see your face in film
I fantasize about the thrill
What gives you grace is mine
When you walk onto the stage
I surrender to a helpless maze
What a vagabond can surmise

So why do stars discover time
When all light is seen at night
Can you be my guiding light
Across the scapes of Mars
That which plucks from Plato's harp
Or strums like Clapton's guitars
Let's dance dance my love
Like creatures of Renoir
Be all that my love and more

Let's drift like waves upon a shore
Each ripple one on top another
In your embrace melts sweet amour
As we lay and start to explore
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
Having a go at this was fun......

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Comments (13)

lucy1777
HOO YA YANKEE! THOSE LAST TWO LINES ARE WELL.....HOT HOT HOT GODD WRITE MY FRIEND!crazy elephant dancing
ReaderOfSouls
Smokin'!! thumbs up thumbs up wine
Special_Lady67
heart wings Smokin HOTT ... smoltly written
Macduff5
Hi Chris,

Mate this is fantastic. If a woman wouldn't melt with those words then they are devoid of feeling. It just gets better. dancing thumbs up cheers
swade777
Yankee, don't go getting a big head, I'm sure Lucy meant to say 'Good' write and NOT 'Godd' write!
Regardless.... she's right.... it's hot, hot, hot! thumbs up
Fellsman
Hi Yankee

There's enough steam coming out of this to power an ocean going liner... Yup - schmaltz by the bucket load... Another contender for this weekend's Golden Syrup spoon.

Bill wine wine
Maxeen_1
Yankee cool SMOKING PASSION...You little devil :))devil I will meet you around the bike shed at 2 pm haha and let our waves unite in frenzied passion hahaheart wings lips : bouquet
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore
windyweatherly
Let's drift like waves upon a shore
Each ripple one on top another
In your embrace melts sweet amour
As we lay and start to explore
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore


Wow Yankee, I never thought you could be this so astronomically romantic. This is the first time I have read your write in such an exclusive drive...for love...I am loving it...Isn't it so great that we do have this capability of loving and feeling for someone?

Love it Yankee...

Thanks.

Phyllis
teddybear
Odette67
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore

Well Yankee...If this be a Schmaltzy poem... I'd love to read more Schmaltz... Loved it..
purple heart
mcradloffonline today!
The night sky will be good and dark with the new moon. I should try to see Mars.smitten Nice poem.cheers
Poetnumber1
You paint a commanding picture of delight,compliments ''well done friend'' M.Mhandshake
Yankee4youonline today!
Wow I am blown away by all your responses...hehe,,,actually this was written for Rachel McAdams....so if anybody has an inside connection with her, please send her a copy and let me know and I'll be waiting for her phone call....hahahaha :)))
Ahyra
Nice poem Yankee4u wine
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