Excessive is my love of thee Leading me away from sorrow Whenever I see your face in film I fantasize about the thrill What gives you grace is mine When you walk onto the stage I surrender to a helpless maze What a vagabond can surmise
So why do stars discover time When all light is seen at night Can you be my guiding light Across the scapes of Mars That which plucks from Plato's harp Or strums like Clapton's guitars Let's dance dance my love Like creatures of Renoir Be all that my love and more
Let's drift like waves upon a shore Each ripple one on top another In your embrace melts sweet amour As we lay and start to explore The meaning we give to love Is higher than its tidal bore With all our ecstasy we give To love too hot to ignore
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 21, 2012
Hi Chris,
Mate this is fantastic. If a woman wouldn't melt with those words then they are devoid of feeling. It just gets better.
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAApr 21, 2012
Yankee, don't go getting a big head, I'm sure Lucy meant to say 'Good' write and NOT 'Godd' write! Regardless.... she's right.... it's hot, hot, hot!
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKApr 21, 2012
Yankee SMOKING PASSION...You little devil :)) I will meet you around the bike shed at 2 pm haha and let our waves unite in frenzied passion haha : The meaning we give to love Is higher than its tidal bore With all our ecstasy we give To love too hot to ignore
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAApr 21, 2012
Let's drift like waves upon a shore Each ripple one on top another In your embrace melts sweet amour As we lay and start to explore The meaning we give to love Is higher than its tidal bore With all our ecstasy we give To love too hot to ignore
Wow Yankee, I never thought you could be this so astronomically romantic. This is the first time I have read your write in such an exclusive drive...for love...I am loving it...Isn't it so great that we do have this capability of loving and feeling for someone?
Love it Yankee...
Thanks.
Phyllis
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 21, 2012
The meaning we give to love Is higher than its tidal bore With all our ecstasy we give To love too hot to ignore
Well Yankee...If this be a Schmaltzy poem... I'd love to read more Schmaltz... Loved it..
Wow I am blown away by all your responses...hehe,,,actually this was written for Rachel McAdams....so if anybody has an inside connection with her, please send her a copy and let me know and I'll be waiting for her phone call....hahahaha :)))
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaApr 22, 2012
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Mate this is fantastic. If a woman wouldn't melt with those words then they are devoid of feeling. It just gets better.
Regardless.... she's right.... it's hot, hot, hot!
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore
Each ripple one on top another
In your embrace melts sweet amour
As we lay and start to explore
The meaning we give to love
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore
Wow Yankee, I never thought you could be this so astronomically romantic. This is the first time I have read your write in such an exclusive drive...for love...I am loving it...Isn't it so great that we do have this capability of loving and feeling for someone?
Love it Yankee...
Thanks.
Phyllis
Is higher than its tidal bore
With all our ecstasy we give
To love too hot to ignore
Well Yankee...If this be a Schmaltzy poem... I'd love to read more Schmaltz... Loved it..