When a man and a woman fall in love A match made in heaven above This is where the source of life began Two human beings making their destinies one Exclusively reserving themselves for each other All their lives not wanting another Finding in each other so much pleasure Each regarding the other as a special treasure Faithfully serving each other through the years Sharing each other joys and tears For their hearts, mind,body and soul Is knit by that which never grows old
A very nice composure of poetic expression!! I'd 'humbly' point out that there's a couple small typo's that if corrected, would enhance the quality of your contribution.... Line 6 - last word should be 'another'
Line 11 - 'theit' should be 'their'.
A poem with excellent content!!!
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 17, 2012
I agree with Swade777 ! Classic old school style.
prengeOPmandeville, Manchester JamaicaJul 17, 2012
Thank you. That's what I get for not reading before I post. Will do right now
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Line 11 - 'theit' should be 'their'.
A poem with excellent content!!!