She’s changing, evolving, growing, and turning into someone else Fighting away vanity, begging to have modesty Showing the green skin under her black Showing she’s not all talk showing she’s more than that
Broken little girl Grew up in a broken little world Scars on her arms scars on her soul Will snatch your heart and go Keep your wallet keep your money Smother her in pity as she uses you to soothe her vanity
Leading men on, perfectly She has always been good at stringing men along seamlessly I guess it’s the need to feel wanted As her vanity was once hunted to extinction I guess her heart is not big it's an illusion a plastic extension Fake exterior to conceal her real demeanour
Why do people judge Lorii like this? Try their best to make her feel worthless Do you want to destroy her? because you’re welcome to But Lorii will never become this monster you want her to turn into.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
What happend to you Lorii? you've changed. <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< NO I HAVENT v.v
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 25, 2012
This is a fine write Lori,a very positive spirit to have but sadly many donnot see their selfworth more than what others may portray them to be,rather they dwell on the image of what one might say about them.Thanks
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 25, 2012
Hi Lori.. a good write from a good soul! Live your life your way..not as others wish or assume, for they are blind.. we all change over time through learning more of ourselves & surroundings..
You are changing! I know every year (around birthday time) I would have a big think and congratulate on how much more I had learned in the last year and that now I knew 'everything' no - don't laugh I actually thought that every year. Until I reached 32yrs and with my new found year of wisdom that year I realized (much to my disappointment!) that I was never going to know everything! <--- but there is no need to despair about growing up, changing, whatever - that's what life is all about and there is the fun part. If you always stayed the same it would be dreadful, static, boring - but you don't so you are and will not be any of these things. Me? I'm just a sage old lady now, looking forward to my rocking chair knitting hours bla bla yada yada NOT! Keep changing and write it all down - for posterity of course!
loriiOPlondon, Greater London, England UKAug 25, 2012
Thank you :D i swear you guys teach me everything i was never taught lol i love u guys loolz <3
Lorii
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 25, 2012
Dont go teary on me gal And I would like to see your green skin And you do write fantastic poems , Very meaningful and daring ...that's the spirit ! Do pick up the good things from us all .
Lorii dear...change is inevitable to all of us...as you mature your thoughts and ways will change with you for the better. Just live your life the way you want it as long as you know in your heart what you hear is not right...let them talk....keep on becoming a more beautiful you. You're a beautiful girl, a beautiful person...you don't need to prove anything...let the world talk...just do your walk!
loriiOPlondon, Greater London, England UKAug 26, 2012
i mean i havent changed though or have i? :s im so confused people are telling me i act different when i just see the same old Lorii Black O.o maybe im in denial lol
Comments (8)
Thanks for sharing lori
Keep changing and write it all down - for posterity of course!
Lorii
And I would like to see your green skin
And you do write fantastic poems ,
Very meaningful and daring ...that's the spirit ! Do pick up the good things from us all .
Thanks guys for your comments :)
Lorii