Am I Beautiful?

Am I beautiful?

Have I gotten the definition wrong?

Its the word I've longed for so long

the make up permanently on

eyes filled with tears as I know I wouldn't be close to beauty without none.


I wish for a kiss

then my prince to grab my face and say

“you're beautiful”

but am I?

Has he got the definition wrong?


I wish for a long night of hot passion

for my prince to pull my arm back as I reach to draw the curtain

and look into my eyes and say

“you're beautiful”

but am I?

With no designer clothing and make up still on but barely holding?


I wish for a hour in his indoor swimming pool

and as steam lingers on the windows

he uses his finger to write

“you're beautiful”

but am I?

With the letters fading, I ask “haven't you got the definition wrong?”
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Posted: Dec 2012
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mcradloff
James Blunt has a really good song called "You're Beautiful". I think of the list of women I have told that to and it is quite small. Maybe one or two at best in my life. Billy Crystal had a song back in the early 1980's called "You Look Marvelous". "My father says to me, Fernando, don't be a shnook, it's not how you feel, it how you look. He was marvelous, but darling, you look marvelous!"teddybear dancingsanta
JimEee
Loril
You are beautiful, like the blush of a wild rose!

The beauty of a setting sun!

A lovely enchanting white swan
floating upon a peaceful lake!

A lovely image with flowing gown,
seen in the magical mist of the morning dew!

Your handsome princes loving lips will say it too!

Are you beautiful... tis in the eyes & heart
of the beholder and your charming prince
is awaiting, there for you!

To answer your question, "Am I"
Yes!
JimEee
Skymore
Any person is beautiful - we haven't got only a face , but all the rest : what we see and what we don't . Very often the unseen things are worthier than the outwardly seen..
A person is a complex of everything.Be happy what you are !
Merry Christmas !
teddybear
elo69
by any definition imo,but the one you hold for yourself is most important....elo...wave
Yankee4youonline today!
Only the person who was truly 'made for you and only you' could ever see how amazingly beautiful you really are....angel
bananat
Lori, i think all humans want to be perceived as what society says is beautiful but, it will never come from a bottle, nor a label...it comes from people like you who with their words can touch people from all over the world hug
Ladybee42
I'm a woman - so I'm not going to give you an answer to the 'beautiful' question - I'll just say, does it really matter? Are you having fun? have you good friends and do you laugh much?

If it doesn't matter and it's yes to the other three - then you are lovely and having a lovely time of it. grin


Have a lovely Christmas too!


snowman2 snowman2 snowman2
lorii
I love your comments guys, but please dont take my poem out of context too much. the question isnt really umm about me as such, just about a persona in a poem, just the title of the poem lolz

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to actually tell me i am, im really shocked lolz lovely comments

i luv ya all

ta

Lorii purple heart
Bigdauda
Excellent..
I like this line..Have I gotten the definition wrong?
Its the word I've longed for so longteddybear
Yankee4youonline today!
Lorii, yeah you really are....beautiful....
beautifulyou
Yes, you are rose
beautifulyou
Like Bigdauda, I really like 'have I gotten the definition wrong?'

Beauty needs no definition. Your write is powerful. Ty bouquet
alonejohn
you are only the most beautiful girl on here
Fellsman
Suppose you are beautiful (and beauty is only in the eye of the beholder) would that make you a better person than your less physically attractive friends? I simply pose the question and offer no judgement.
lorii
thank you very much, i honestly do want you all to know right now is a bad moment in time for me. I honest'y feel let down stressed out, but worst of all ALONE. will beauty get me in something which will never fade? no. inner beauty will. I'm not like most girls my age and i can say that as its not really a good thing but i want to be married with a little girl, i dont want to exsplore im just not like that, i want to marry an older guy (not too much older as that would be seen as something else by my family lol) but someone on the same page as me. wants to
live life with 1 woman.(me) .... but its impossible lolz

Thank you all so much for making me smile today. purple heart
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