Perfect for a moment as we painted each second together high contrasts of colour on a canvas which was purely white Love makes things look bright but just as the sun trades with the moon the brightness ends all too soon.
Sweetness turns bitter softness turns sharp just like how the brightness of morning slowly announces night's dark I crawl under your shouting I avoid your glare the memories of how we used to be fluttering away your kisses blacken my cheek like tooth decay.
Now I have to leave you've taken it to far and if I could I so would play this love game again I'll be wiser, sharper, stronger and if you actually presented an opportunity for me to hurt you I wouldn't...I would just leave you.
Hello baby doll! How are you doing? This poem is just great, I don't know what you've been up to but whatever you've been doing it's made your poetry rise up the wonderful scale. Some of your phrasing just makes the poem rock.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 22, 2012
Hello pouting princess ... This is a very interesting poem ... Take care
Hi , i'm a first timer to your stuff, it was great , good phrases, keep it up. all the best, Kg
loriiOPlondon, Greater London, England UKOct 24, 2012
Wow hey everyone, its been a little while. im glad you enjoy this new poem, i tried a new style i've been working on. I try to use less emotion in the poem so there's more space for self interpretation and gives the poem an unlocked meaning.
Comments (6)
This poem is just great, I don't know what you've been up to but whatever you've been doing it's made your poetry rise up the wonderful scale. Some of your phrasing just makes the poem rock.
i'm a first timer to your stuff, it was great , good phrases, keep it up.
all the best,
Kg
Thanks for commenting :)
Lorii