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Ressurection (Haiku)

Mindful is madness
Mindless mannequins baffle
Steady stream of flies

Trapped in burning light
Painful electrocution
Pesky human plight

Zapping to a crisp
Attracted in blinded faith
Antidote to sin

Greater by design
Most darkful persecution
Guilt that lies within

Cast over water
Departed spirits will fly
Life begins again
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
Once again I am confounded by constant ressurection of life from one life form recylced into another life form through cylces of death and darkness and life and light spinning and falling like a shooting star or a bug on fire.....whatever existed before will exist again.

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Yankee4youonline today!
Ok so this poem sucks.....so you win some and you lose some....and I don't really care. violin violin violin
madtat29
Energy never dies..only is transformed...I like it Yankee drinking
LadyMorgana60
Hi Yankee.. I'm not an expert on Haiku format, but I enjoyed your poem too..it does not suck! lol..
Your first stanza I really enjoyed

Mindful is madness
Mindless mannequins baffle
Steady stream of flies


which flows to a great follow through..and ending line

Life begins again!


Well done I say :) and thanks for sharing. peace wine
Odette67
Cast over water
Departed spirits will fly
Life begins again

Reading these Haiku's Yankee remind me how transient life is. I happen to like them...They certainly don't suck.teddybear purple heart
Poetnumber1
laugh ''You win some and lose some''laugh I for one dont think that your poem sucks...its quite commical that you would say so.Excellentpeace cheers
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