To Belong Waterfall Challenge

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Jun 2013 573 Views 8 comments

To Belong (Waterfall Challenge)

the roar of water
floods my senses
my hearing intoxicated
my vision overwhelmed
majestically pouring
its heart out
over time smoothed rocks
dancing within the eddies

a dress of white
cascading beautifully
elegantly softly
embellishing the surround
to be painted in colours
as bright an inspiring
as the birds in song
to allow this natural beauty
to feel to live
to belong........

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Posted: Jun 2013

About this poem:

just thought i would drag this one out of the cupboard seeing how there is a challenge on........don't usually repost but just could not pass this opportunity up .........

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Comments (8)

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJun 7, 2013

ty Nuwahri so peaceful and full of harmonious bliss fine pen

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJun 7, 2013

Hi Shadow ...thanks for the opportunity........appreciate the comments ..............Regards Nu

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 8, 2013

Beautiful imagery Nu.

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJun 9, 2013

Hey Poet ........thanks mate ........hope all is well .....regards Nu

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJun 9, 2013

the beauty of this place makes you feel you belong...very grateful for having had the chance to see this beauty with you.. thank you my dear..

online today!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 9, 2013

a dress of white
cascading beautifully
elegantly softly

This is a lovely picture, beautiful

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJun 9, 2013

Thank you my lovely lady but it is I who should be grateful .....to see you in your element is a rewarding experience and to share that with you is a gift in itself........Love Nu

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaJun 9, 2013

Hi LadyJewel.............thanks for the lovely comments glad you liked it .......Regards Nu

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