yankees challenge a true love was born

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yankee's challenge: a true love was born

Author: Unknown

your eyes serene
settled on mine
I felt the beatings
of your heart
you held my hand
we kissed, danced
words unspoken
we just knew
passion was unleashed
deep within our hearts
we both felt
a true love was born.

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Posted: Nov 2013

About this poem:

Thank you yankee for this opportunity. I hope it works.

(40 word challenge)

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Comments (22)

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 15, 2013

very beautifully drawn words excellent piece

rapturecapture

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 15, 2013

Hi Serenity
A true art of thought, in this wonderful,forty words
Wow...serenity you capture a a pure lovers moment, so sweetly in,
a true love was born
Loved it,thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Yankee4you

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 15, 2013

Wow. Two worlds collide!! What a beautiful poem. Dance Kissing Passion. You got it covered!!

rapturecapture

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 15, 2013

Hi Sundayrose1

May I say first how sorry I am to get the names mixed up, I have been reading so much poetry tonight

I got authors mixed up!
Thank god I needed to see it again,It was then... I found my mistake
Again, may I just say your thoughts, moved me...enough to find my mistake... so thank you for that

Martina xxx

KittyHugs

KittyHugsGod's Country, North Carolina USANov 15, 2013

This perfectly describes the "fall I had" for a Yankee once upon a time

But those days are gone and life moves on

Thanks for reminding me of fond memories, not bitter feelings. We went our separate ways and grew from the relationship we had. No regrets

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 15, 2013

hi sundayrose,
beautifully simple,
simply beautiful

Macduff5

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 16, 2013

Hi Sundayrose,

Your succinct explanation of how true love is born...is just so true. Nicely done.

orientalkoru

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaNov 16, 2013

We never know when true love is born... But when it does... We just know.. Thanks SundayRose1...

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Thank you so much Liam for reading.

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Martina, thanks, don't worry, it is not important that once in a while we make a mistake. It is the feeling we get from what we read that counts and I am so happy for your comment.

Thanks again,

SR

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Kittyhugs, first I am quite jolted up that this is a reminder of your lost love. But the truth is we do fall and then rise and then fall and then rise again. Believe me, I was so hurt once and now I am so happy because my husband whom, I met here is now very happily married with me and we plan on making it for forever...But even if that forever lasts only for so long, it is the feelings at the moment that counts...

Thanks and I wish you luck and happiness. Believe me, we all have our chances in being hurt, and be happy again, and again..

This is how life is...

Take care...

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Beautiful you, thanks much and I hope to read always from you...

SR

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Mcduff5 Your comment is so highly appreciated..Thanks so much..

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Yankee, thank you for initiating this challenge, you just made me flow with ideas and I am so grateful...Thanks again.,..

SR

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Kathy and Nu whenever I glance at your beautiful pictures together, it just makes my heart jump because, I too, just like you sealed our love in marriage after meeting here. This is a very beautiful site and I am very very happy for the both of you...

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKNov 16, 2013

hi sundayrose a lovely enticing poem of simple loving beauty

hedistuff

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USANov 16, 2013

I really like this, sunday rose. where have you been all my life?

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 17, 2013

Thanks Shadow and it is a pleasure to share your thoughts on my writes...

Take care

SR

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 17, 2013

Hedi my pleasure on your read. I have always been around, just didn't notice it...

Take care
SR

wayne34

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 15, 2014

Nothing like sweet passionate kissing to stir the heart nicly penned sundarose1 can you see the passion in my heart

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 16, 2014

Thanks Wayne

SR

sundayrose1

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 16, 2014

Wayne with due respect, I can't see the passion but if you feel it? Then you are a good spirited person. thanks for your comment.

SR

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