I will be there

by Unknown

Jan 2014 532 Views 22 comments

I will be there

Author: Unknown

let not the distance
be our hindrance
for the water
upon which you stand on
has become the moving shores
that's dripping on my soul
and this miles between us
is but a brush of the wind touching
your silky skin
and when you close your eyes
I'm not too much of a distance
really
I'm always besides you
sharing the same moonlight
that leads me to your way
all you need to do is wait
and soon I will caress
your gentle and lovely face
soon
I will surely be there.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2014

About this poem:

waiting can sometimes be hard

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Comments (22)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 2, 2014

very beautifully penned phyllis excellent piece

Dejavu4uSomewhere, West Virginia USAJan 2, 2014

Sundayrose,

So sweet. I am so very happy for you. Yes, waiting is difficult sometimes isn't it? Hang in there. Soon I hope for you. Lovely poem by the way. Peace my friend. Many Blessings, Pink.

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 2, 2014

This is very beautiful to read, I can see the oceans between them, and can relate to this in my heart, thank you Phyllis, a pleasure to read

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 3, 2014

hold on to your dreams and soon all will become a realitymy dearest friend

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAJan 3, 2014

Lovely pieces of you, moving in its essence. So glad to read your words again. In waiting is patience, I use to think if I want too long the less worth it becomes. I guess it just depends on what we are waiting for though. Regard WCS….Jesse

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJan 3, 2014

Hi, sundayrose1,
...miles between us is but a brush of the wind touching… Surely, hope must be found in knowing I'm always besides you sharing... Thanks for sharing.

adjhematteson, Illinois USAJan 3, 2014

SR a very nice read thank you for sharing this with CS. Have a blessed day my friend.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 3, 2014

Very lovely Phyllis, I guess waiting can be a load sometimes when you truly long to be with someone. But love makes that wait seem like just a day.

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJan 3, 2014

Awesome write of patience and love.

Ken

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 3, 2014

'and this miles between us
is but a brush of the wind touching'

so, so true SR, 'but a brush of the wind touching'
...the vail that appears to separate us from the one we love
is but vail

loveavalancheCape Town, Western Cape South AfricaJan 4, 2014

I'm always besides you
sharing the same moonlight
that leads me to your way
all you need to do is wait
beautiful words rose thanks for the words friend...Nyarai