Lighting the Way

Holiday lights color
December moments.
Their primary colors glow
through the darkness -
yet cannot compete
with the brightness of stars
that shine and self-consume
in their passion to ignite
direction to weary travelers.
 
Each bulb on the
Christmas string burns
with such low intensity
it cannot kindle the most
delicate branch to blaze -
yet, year after year, attempts
to mimic nature in a twinkling show
of presence, and perhaps substance,
in a world trying to find its way.
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
I love this season…a cause to ponder meaning within creation, including what we create and celebrate. While recognizing the illuminary icons that lighted our path to the present and those who lead us into the future, we should not underestimate the power of our own efforts to get others as well as ourselves through the darkness of life's winters into the light.

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Comments (22)

boyshchrm6
Very nice,especially
"in a world trying to find its way"
Perhaps a comment on the recent
environmental conference?cool angel thumbs up applause
jazzy75
gnj4u - wonderful poem and thoughts "of light and life" to go with it :-) thanks for sharing teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6 and Jazzy75,

It is difficult to put words out not knowing how people will react...hoping that each will have some meaning for the reader. Thank you for reading and sharing your kind and insightful thoughts.
Earlgreytea
I said before, I say again, you have a gift for taking the mundane and illuminating the extraordinary in it, thank you for sharing your talent..., you're one of those souls who does not merely see an 'acorn' but perceives the majesty of an oak tree in all its glory hiding within...
gnj4u
Hi, Earlgreytea,
Continually moved by the awesome beauty of nature, I ponder the place of humanity within it and our efforts to find our way. Your words are so kind and much appreciated. Thank you.
hedistuff
really nice g
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
Thank you for reading. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
optimisticme
Lovely poem!
gnj4u
Hi, optimisticme,
Thank you!
agoodguy2have
"shine and self-consume in their passion to ignite" could be each one of us on some level. now i've read 'em all...thank you.
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Thank you for picking up on that. Thank you for reading and your comments. I'm glad you made it through them all.
candykid
Such truth....love the message in this one Joy. Wishing you a very happy set of holidays this season...purple heart
avias
Enjoyed reading "Lighting the Way"...there is so much to be aware of in life...subtle meanings often unseen...thanks for bringing a fresh viewpoint to some familiar scenery.
And no matter how much we try to mimic nature... we can never quite capture the beauty and purity of it.thumbs up conversing
ImagineLove
angel2
Joy, what a beautiful name to go with this beautiful write! "Lighting the Way" such a perfect title! The last line:

"In a world trying to find its way" - lovely!

This one I will read aloud as is my practice, because you know poetry is to read aloud and this entices me greatly!

We need to be, the light... the world needs to see!

Much love to you! hug purple heart teddybear
Jaybri4u
If everyday was like christmas
My path to home would be joyfully lighted,
And i would not walk astray

Thank you for this beautiful message gnj4u

Best
J
rapturecapture
Hi gnj4u


I read your poem a few times now...How I wish I had written this beautiful poem! you translate the most wonderful glow from your special thoughts in, Lighting the Way

Really loved it!

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx teddybear hug bouquet
jazzy75
Ohhh,,,I'm so happy to have read this again....it's a perfect poem for this time of year. It does make me question what it is all about.

Merry Christmas my friend.hug
Mizzy4
Lovely seasonal poem Joy,
Beautifully written.
Hope you have a lovely Christmas.

Regards Mick.
wine
timotie
Respected gnj. angel
I appreciate your poem
Stating the the season in Lovely words thumbs up
Thanks for Sharing bouquet
heart wings teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Mizzy4, Thank you for your generous comments about my poem. They are much appreciated. Having this poem resurface has prompted me to write a poem about this year's lightless tree that, nevertheless, manages to lift my spirits and point toward lighter days. Thank you for that, too. Hi, timothy, Thank you for your kind comments about my poem. It's comforting to know that its message still speaks to this season of hope and light. To both (and ALL), Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!!!
gnj4u
Hi, timotie, please forgive me for not timely noticing the auto-correct done on your name.
russonicholas805
Nice poem beautiful, I like it and I am looking forward to reading more poems coming from you dear
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