Confused

by boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario, Canada

Mar 2010 379 Views 12 comments

Confused

I truly don't know what to think
I've persued her to the very brink
I think I'm who she's been searching for
Yet she seems to demand frequently less or more
I'm at my wits end that's for sure
I'm confused do I love her or not
My heart is reserved from previous hurts
It's hard for me to explain thinking in only spurts
I want to talk and to meet her
I'm most certainly excited to greet her
Yet she shoves me away each time
That I want to approach her and make her mine
I believe she has been hurt a lot
And as such she is reluctant to be sought
Yet every farmer knows the truth
If thrown from a horse you must remount of course

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Posted: Mar 2010

About this poem:

Same girl,different day.
Same thing said another way.

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Comments (12)

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMar 10, 2010

I wish you well. She should know what a great soul you are. I hope everything works out. Take care.

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaMar 10, 2010

sounds as though..your signals keep getting crossed.. and she may not really be even shoving you away.. yet merely looking for a little more consistency and faith on your part.Dunno.. just guessing..

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 10, 2010

Boyshchrm...You are one among the poets i have grown fond of( because of your verse) & I am not only your poet pal but your well-wisher & hope the best comes to you,may you both come to terms with your past & find a beautiful rainbow of love that will last for a lifetime.God bless you.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 10, 2010

Let it go my friend, let her come to you!, she knows you are one of the good guys!, even if you do like a few beers!!, great poem though!!
Rob

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Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMar 10, 2010

I like the horse part but there is another horse saying to go with the many. And one I hate to hear. If you can't get in the saddle you can't ride the horse. Hope all goes well for you no matter how it goes.

dreamwolf5264francestown, New Hampshire USAMar 10, 2010

yeah,i've been in this spot,and i know what you mean,just be careful,she might have someone else on the side,be like the good poet that you are...look at all the angles,be cautious,she might be hiding something...goodluck boyshchrm6

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAMar 16, 2010

boyshchrm - love how you describe the feelings of the unknown relationship in your poem....i think most can relate to this confused state.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 27, 2010

Thanks PinkPoetress,but you know Murphy's Law
Always prevails....TY

NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKMar 27, 2010

Aw so sad. My heart is reserved from previous hurts, I know only to well how that feels. Good luck

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 27, 2010

Sounds like a distinct possibility QStorm.

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAMar 28, 2010

intriguing..."Yet she seems to demand frequently less or more"
I like stuff like that, makes me think...Thanks ysh

purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKMar 28, 2010

She may not know how you feel!! You are holding back from lost love too .. she's been hurt before so have you.. Tell her how you are feeling and let her have a reaction if this gets a response then you have your answer.. Most of us have been hurt at some time before for one reason or another. BUT ROB IS RIGHT TOO!!