Painted love or life?

When love is missing,
Life has no meaning,
Beauty never last for long,
But Happiness can keep you strong.

Its not the clothes you wear,
Or the friends you have there,
Wealth and misery are a pair,
Beware your nakedness they share!

A kiss from demons brings unforseen dangers,
Your flesh rotting with twisted monsters,
When human forsakes their natural orders,
Wickedness will bring you untold horrors!

An ounce of gold is all it takes,
To buy your freedom and sell,
The price paid will take it's toll,
In hades your resting place is built.
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
What do u think when you read this?
Is it crystal clear or doea it mean something else for you...

Footnote:: in hades your rest is placed
OR in hades your resting place is built
OR in hades lies your resting place

WHICH SOUNDS THE BEST ?

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candykid
It's really not so crystal clear. I'm seeing a few references to the paradigms of worldly possessions, but when love is missing, I think that it is clear to most that all else will fail.
morgen90210online today!
I thought it was all jumble up ...thou Ckid i waa thinking it was abt selling your soul ...thank ypu
candykid
It is not all jumbled up. It makes sense as you intended it to. I know what you are capable of Danesh, I have read extremely well-written poems from you so thank you for accepting the constructive criticism. .....In regards to your footnote, "In Hades lies your resting place" is the better choice, as it implies that it already exists, rather than it perhaps coming into existence at some time in the future. ..keep up the good work bro.
morgen90210online today!
My humble thanks CandyK...ive just written this a while ago...so hopefully more to come...nice to meet familiar face u have a wonderful weekend
gnj4u
Hi, morgen90210,
Life has shown that neither Wealth nor poverty, alone, makes for misery. Its not the clothes you wear, Or the friends you have there... Yet, where there are friends, there is love. Where there is love, there is Happiness. And, as the poet writes, Happiness can keep you strong. Thanks for sharing.
morgen90210online today!
gnj4u..my humble thanks dear
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