staged

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Jul 2015 841 Views 2 comments

~staged~

Goin thru a moment
That moments in time
Not your's but mine
Not really sure why.

Not a moment to judge
Or take it to trial
A moment that's there
Be gone in a while.

That moment came calling
With no knock on the door
I turned the knob
Let it walk in.

That moment threw a vale of dummin down light
To try to avoid good logic in play
A thought on a mission
A curve in the play.

~Bentlee~

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Posted: Jul 2015

About this poem:

how do you like that inner voice, better yet, who's in charge. Hmmmmm into the abyss lol, cheers, hope you like it.

Comments (2)

peachmelbawexford, Wexford IrelandJul 8, 2015

Awsume piece,

Life is a stage every day is a new scene

Some scenes play over in the head ,,sometimes we adjust them instead,

Yes we the directors but sometimes it's good to not know the direction makes more interesting,

Act on it instinct and listen to inner voice,

That's telling me now to shut up and make a cupa tea,

Well done Bentlee.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaJul 8, 2015

Hello Peach, great comment and perspectives. I think also there are many times when that voice is saying things that at times must be ignored, as those thoughts if voiced can be words that will not be easy to take back. Cheers and ty for your comment.